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Hi folks,
here a little preview on the next chapter of The Time Traveller. It is only a short piece of the chapter and it will still take some more time before I will finish it. But until then this should give some ideas about it.
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As always comments are more than welcome. If you find my story was quite pleasing to read - please leave a comment.
And like in the previous chapters - if you find something that about my writing style (grammar, repeating mistakes, and and and ) please tell me. I really want to improve myself.
All characters belong to ME, MTT3.
here a little preview on the next chapter of The Time Traveller. It is only a short piece of the chapter and it will still take some more time before I will finish it. But until then this should give some ideas about it.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
As always comments are more than welcome. If you find my story was quite pleasing to read - please leave a comment.
And like in the previous chapters - if you find something that about my writing style (grammar, repeating mistakes, and and and ) please tell me. I really want to improve myself.
All characters belong to ME, MTT3.
Category Story / All
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 2.8 kB
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It's hard to find nice stories with a male human and dragon as main characters, especially with emotions and love involved. It's mostly these types of stories I go searching for when I feel like reading something long and plotty, so I'm really enjoying your story so far.
I read all the chapters in the past couple of hours, and the part I hate the most is when I ran out of words to read. XD
My favorite parts are when Matt and Syrren are cuddling, like how you described after the incident with them being detected by radar. The way I imagine it is really cute; wouldn't be a bad idea to have a picture created for this scene.
Can't wait for the next chapter to this awesome story, I'm really glad I found it.
Hope you update soon, but don't rush it!
I read all the chapters in the past couple of hours, and the part I hate the most is when I ran out of words to read. XD
My favorite parts are when Matt and Syrren are cuddling, like how you described after the incident with them being detected by radar. The way I imagine it is really cute; wouldn't be a bad idea to have a picture created for this scene.
Can't wait for the next chapter to this awesome story, I'm really glad I found it.
Hope you update soon, but don't rush it!
Thanks buddy. I really try to give my stories a real plot, so people can more identify themselves with the protagonists.
Thanks for idea. I guess I get a commission one day for that scene.
I will try to do so, but not until next week, have a test on monday, so there will be some learning before I can continue writing. But then I hope to post it soon. So stay tuned.
Thanks for idea. I guess I get a commission one day for that scene.
I will try to do so, but not until next week, have a test on monday, so there will be some learning before I can continue writing. But then I hope to post it soon. So stay tuned.
I really enjoy reading this. It's rather like a book I read called "When the Sleeper Wakes" about a man who falls asleep, and when he wakes up, many thousands of years have gone by and the world has been thrown in a veritable dystopia. I really like how you touch up on sociological changes over the course of time. Not many people have the patience to think up those kinds of things. And your characters have real dimension to them. I care about what happens to them!
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*whispers* I think they'd make a cute couple :)
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*whispers* I think they'd make a cute couple :)
Yeah, I've read about that book in a Sci-Fi lexicon. The plot is maybe slightly similar, but I guess not much. Can't be inspired by it since I never read the book.
For the sociological changes - I am simply trying to imaging how the future will be. I am looking for trends, and possible events that could happen in our near future. So just to let you know, what I write in this story-series here, is something I see as a possible future. But I really, really, hope I will be wrong. Just curious, because you commented here on the Preview, did you read the fourth chapter aswell? If yes, could you please maybe do a seperate comment there, I would love that, to have a single comment for each specific chapter where people explain what they liked and what they like to see changed.
For the sociological changes - I am simply trying to imaging how the future will be. I am looking for trends, and possible events that could happen in our near future. So just to let you know, what I write in this story-series here, is something I see as a possible future. But I really, really, hope I will be wrong. Just curious, because you commented here on the Preview, did you read the fourth chapter aswell? If yes, could you please maybe do a seperate comment there, I would love that, to have a single comment for each specific chapter where people explain what they liked and what they like to see changed.
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