This was really interesting to read. All of the characters have their own persanaliteys, the sorry is also really interesting. I am really looking forward to read the rest of the sorry ^.=.^

i ment sory :D

I personally think he's just the last human in that part of the world. If there's one survivor, there are probably more somewhere, such as people in mines or other areas that werent damaged by the apocalypse. Love sci-fi like this, the whole meeting new species thing is great fun.

Just wait and see...

Your story is well done Matt . It's quite interesting watching the aliens how they try to come clear with the conditions on earth and with our technology. You also made a great job with describing the aliens thoughts when they discover something for them unknown . Really well done story

Thanks my friend. I tried to make it easy to read that is also why I decided to make it a short chapter.

I speed read most of that but considering i think its really gewd o3o . Character developement set nicely and the scene was set beautifully. Ill be reading the rest laters ^^

Wow, thanks buddy. I am happy you like it. And as I said don't stress yourself with reading, I am happy with any time you read them.

naw i tend to write from time to time so its good to mass read stuff you like for example *points up* o3o

Wow, thanks for the compliment. I plan on doing a lot more of this series. It's my second series and both are far away from being finished, so stay tuned for a lot more chapter coming ahead.

certainly will gorgeous looking so forward to it x3

Upon reading this there were several things I really enjoyed about this - for me the scene, the charecters and the plot were well thought of and developed during the chapter. Introducing each of the charecters along with their personalities through interaction and their sepciality and purpose on this ''expadition'' onto our planet. Over the course I really enjoyed reading about the description you gave such as the ''Wintery Clothes'' and how they looked ridicoulous whilst wearing them as of course for their size.

But for me overall towards the end I loved the suspense and how you captured the excitement within the entirely different species as of how they found the supposidly last human on the planet (Which I myself don't believe) but the way it was all layed out and the explanation and difference on technology was well done as well. Overall a well-written first chapter and I think you have done absoulutly fantastic with this. ^^

Wow, as always a really nice description of your thoughts. Thanks buddy.

I really hope to write the next chapter very soon.

That was awesome =3 I liked how it slowly built up, drawing me in as I went along, and then that last line was brilliant ^^

Brilliant? Hehe, thanks. It is nice to hear I triggered a button, so you continued reading. Expect a lot more chapters to come.

*giggles* yeah =3

(I need to read it yet, but the buttons to get to the next one are missing, bud!)

Fixed, hope you can do it without any problems now.

Yes, thank you! I had faved this after linking back to "first" from ch. 3, then went back to ch. 3 to go to "previous" to get to ch. 2. It was a roundabout way, but I managed. Buttons help immensely, though!

Thanks Matt!

This is really good, feels so in depth and well told!

NOW TO FINISH THE OTHERS!

Wow, thanks. Looks forward to some more nice comments of yours.

hey just finish reading the first chapter and i got to say i loved it. Very well written in my opinion would you ever think of getting it published? just asking

Hehe, heard that quite often in the last time, if I plan to publish it. Tu speak the truth...not really. But maybe in the future.... ^^

Hope you will like the other chapters too. ^^

I cant say exactly what but this story hit a soft spot for me.. I do so enjoy first contact stories with reptilian aliens and humans...
I even had one posted in my gallery. in my story its a human that explores a alien world. but he crashes and is found by some reptilians, injured on a beach not to far from the weakage of his ship.

Thanks. Good that I've been able write the emotions I felt when I wrote it.

Sounds intriguing, maybe will have a look at it sometime. ^^

And if you like first-contact situations, then maybe have a look at my other series - 'The Tourist Guide'

. And thanks for the comment.

Oops, my bad. Mistake. ^^ Didn't notice it was the tourist guide series you posted that comment to. ^^ Thought it was the Time Traveller. ^^'

hehe. no problem. I plan on reading that next. the first contact story i mentioned is in my gallery. but Ill send you a dropbox link to the updated version in a note.

oh... i´m glad that i readed it...

1) So i have to ask you....if you accept negative critic.....i don´t want you say that it is bad story... only say what is a bit wrong or so...(no english i´m not so in english XD) but if you will agree

2) I have to say that it was for me enjoy.... i really don´t like sci-fi but i like your idea and your sotry XD

3) The people there..... i can´t know how they are looking... Why it is nessesery you can ask... well, because all of guys can´t know who is there for exemple me XD... it is cool if you describe who person are there how they look and so...

4) What is positive.... i like see ironi, which you used... it was really enjoy.... next is how you don´t long describe, how look the place or so....and next positive it is cute that they find a dog XD

I really apologize and i hope that you don´t toutch... i only want say to you more.... no only this was cute, great or thrilling.....
I have to apologize to you too... i readed your work on google translator in chcech...it is better for me XD Thank you very much for this amazing story.... i would like read your next part but if you will agree.... i have to learn now in my school... HUGS if i could you...

You are all welcome buddy, you can always write critics in any way you want to. ^^ And for the how those people look, just have a look into my gallery, there you find two pics of those lizards.

hehe..... okay.... but you give this persones another name..... so it could be fine if you give there description...... i want only help you for another guys who could be read your nice story.....

Thankies and when i will have time i can´t wait on next part.... sorry that it was so long time before..... hugs

Hello there,Red here this is very cool, it is a very interesting post apocalyptic scenario i never would have thought that a lizard like race would visit our planet i just wish they visited it when we were still alive XD. Otherwise it is a good story. Auron here i wish there was more description on the different characters because i got the feel of the personalities but not what they look like. Red here i will read all! The other stories.

Hehe, looking forward to the comments of both of you. ^^

I will try both to write more detailed descriptions of their looks later and also get more illustrations of them, so people can imagine the stories better. ^^

As I've said, this story is very well-written both from a technical and creative standpoint. I like how the reader is kinda put in the same position as the lizards and wonders what this crazy animal that comes up and sniffs them is - then we find out it's a dog! The characters are likable and the story builds up nicely and has you wondering who this caretaker is. Ending on a cliffhanger was a good idea because I'm looking forward to tackling the next chapter.

Late reply is really late. Sorry. ^^;

Thank you for your thoughts on the story. ^^ I really do hope to get something done this year now and don't let such eager readers like you waiting much longer.

Better late than never! Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.