I'm gonna quote Vixyy and say, "YESSSSSSSS... CHALLENGE EAGLE!" And I must say, the quote by Challenge's mentor where he says, “One of the last remnants of a long ago age”
, makes me wonder if we'll ever get to hear about the history of Challenge's world. Good to see this series again.

Aahhh, no comment. For now.

There’ll be more clues soon.

*grins*

YESSSSSSSSSS.... CHALLENGE EAGLE!

*giggles....

V.

Nice work introducing more about this world in this chapter. It's nice to see you decided to add a little more to this story again.

Thanks, going to try keeping at this one for a while.

So good to see you writing this again T... it's too good a story to stop - and I was surprised at the disclosure of the satilite.

V.

Yeah, so as I said above going to see if I can continue this for a bit. As for that little disclosure, that's just the tip of the iceberg.

I don't think it's too short...did you put it into scraps because of the length, or was something else not quite done?

Its just that I decided a while ago to put everything in scraps. I may change my mind later on but I doubt it.

Well shoot it looks like I will have to read the other ones to understand this better!

Your writing is immensely rich and "good" and easy to read even, but it lacks a bit of detail. Everything, even the non-dream sequence, seems dreamy as the style does not change. I can't place what it is, but you infer but never directly say the purposes of what is being done by any of the characters. A more clarity on what they are doing and why (repition from time to time on this stuff is important imo unless it is reviewed extensively in chapters afore)

But yeah, I definitely am excited for future editions... Your writing is great.

Thanks for the critique. Seems I gotta work on a few things but I’m glad you like it anyway.