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Barry didn't have the time to try and process what happened to him before he felt something through his entire body again.
But it wasn't pain this time. It was different.
And suddenly, he started growing.
His muscles swelled even more and faster than before, gaining in hardness and volume at an incredible rate.
He could see and feel his growing biceps and bulging shoulders rip his sleeves to shreds, his expanding pecs and hardening abs stretch his shirt to its limits and tear though it, his expanding feet explode his shoes apart, his thickening hands turn the wheel he was holding in shock into a toy.
In said shock, he didn't realize that he was growing taller as well.
Only when he felt a thud on his head did he realize that the entire cab was filled with trucker muscle, and that the growth wasn't stopping at all.
His shock grew even more, freezing him, to the point he didn't even think of trying to open the door and get out.
Which would have been useless, since 1: his fingers were now too big to use the handle; 2: he was too big in general to go though the door; and 3: the cab's metal frame quickly began to groan and warp, not strong enough to contain the unrelenting growth.
Barry's enlarging body bent and eventually tore through the cab like paper and reached free air, without the tiniest effort or difficulty.
The trucker wasn't even moving, still frozen in astonishment. His sheer growth itself was enough to shred apart the frame, smash the windows, push apart the hood...
And he kept growing.
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caseyljones
Original here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/25353425/
Barry © me
Barry didn't have the time to try and process what happened to him before he felt something through his entire body again.
But it wasn't pain this time. It was different.
And suddenly, he started growing.
His muscles swelled even more and faster than before, gaining in hardness and volume at an incredible rate.
He could see and feel his growing biceps and bulging shoulders rip his sleeves to shreds, his expanding pecs and hardening abs stretch his shirt to its limits and tear though it, his expanding feet explode his shoes apart, his thickening hands turn the wheel he was holding in shock into a toy.
In said shock, he didn't realize that he was growing taller as well.
Only when he felt a thud on his head did he realize that the entire cab was filled with trucker muscle, and that the growth wasn't stopping at all.
His shock grew even more, freezing him, to the point he didn't even think of trying to open the door and get out.
Which would have been useless, since 1: his fingers were now too big to use the handle; 2: he was too big in general to go though the door; and 3: the cab's metal frame quickly began to groan and warp, not strong enough to contain the unrelenting growth.
Barry's enlarging body bent and eventually tore through the cab like paper and reached free air, without the tiniest effort or difficulty.
The trucker wasn't even moving, still frozen in astonishment. His sheer growth itself was enough to shred apart the frame, smash the windows, push apart the hood...
And he kept growing.
Art by
caseyljonesOriginal here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/25353425/
Barry © me
Category Artwork (Digital) / Macro / Micro
Species Werewolf / Lycanthrope
Size 1687 x 2184px
File Size 505.7 kB
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Oh ho ho, oh boy! Here we are - Page 3 of 'Under a growy moon'! This page, this page is perhaps my favourite in the entire sequence! It's here where the growth really starts, and it starts in such a tight, cramped space that Barry easily outgrows and utterly overpowers in such a glorious fashion! As I think I might have mentioned previously, big, powerful canines growing bigger and stronger in tight, enclosed spaces until they burst out dramatically is one of my favourite things! Add in the fact that this page's comic was drawn by a very talented artist, and your excellent writing, and I think you can see why this is one of my favourite pages of yours! So, let's get right into it!
Barry is reeling from his sudden transformation; he's completely stunned, and quite understandably! Sure, the myths and legends of werewolves have been around for hundreds and hundreds of years, but they were exactly that: myths and legends. They weren't supposed to actually exist, to be real, yet here he is, sitting at the wheel of his cab, mutely staring at his hands in dumbfounded shock. However, before he can properly process this bizarre turn of events, his body is wracked with a new sensation - not pain this time, but something else, something different.
Then, just like that, he starts to grow! His entire body surges taller and thicker, his frame bulking up with newfound muscle as his height races upwards by the second, his clothes tearing apart as he rapidly grows so big the steering wheel becomes more akin to a child's toy than an important part of his vehicle! That comparison quickly becomes woefully inadequate however, as his growth continues with no end in sight, his enormous, hulking frame filling the cab to the brim with powerful muscle and thick fur! However, his mighty frame is too powerful for something as pathetic as metal to stop him! His new, improved werewolf body completely overpowers the cab's metal frame, bursting out into the night air, without even the slightest hint of effort, just the force of his own growth! Which is only continuing...
I absolutely love this page, it's utterly fantastic! The growth is just wonderful, the way his clothes draw tighter and tighter around his muscular frame, tearing apart at the seams as his bulk expands, the way the cab becomes so much tighter and cramped as his massive body presses into it, the way the cab is torn apart by his growing, hulking body! It's just brilliant! Now, I love this page - as you might have guessed! - but I've also got some suggestions that I think might help make this already fantastic page even greater!
However, before I get into that, I just want to take a little moment to mention that I really like the way you describe the feeling Barry experiences, you pull off an excellent sense of rapid pace without even mentioning anything about speed at first, it's a nice bit of showing and not telling! By not describing what the feeling itself actually is, it gives the impression that not even Barry himself has time to figure out what it is, other than the fact that whatever it is, it's not pain, before he starts growing! I do have a suggestion for the actual grammar of the sentence, but not the content itself, don't worry. The content's great, ha ha! Anyway, for the grammar thing, I think you mean to say 'process what happened to him before he felt something run through his entire body again.' rather than 'process what happened to him that he felt again something through his entire body.' That's the only thing I can see needing any sort of change at the beginning though, like I said, the beginning is great!
My first real suggestion is about the clothing. Now, I'll admit openly and honestly, that I am a real sucker for detail, and when it comes to clothing, I particularly adore details on how they're failing and stretching and tearing! However, as much as I like it, I do think it would just be a generally good thing for the story, it would certainly help show just how powerful Barry's becoming! Fortunately, it's basically been handed to you on a silver platter because lo and behold, the picture itself shows several whole scenes of clothing being torn apart by his growing frame! From his bulging biceps and cannonball shoulders shredding his sleeves to his shirt stretching across his chest, there's so much you could get out of this! For a really, really nice scene of clothing damage, I have to recommend 'Unchained' by JustBuckingham, which I thoroughly recommend you check out, it's absolutely awesome and I'm sure you'll like it! Besides, you can consider this repayment for being so kind as to link me to that picture, hah! Of course, that's just for inspiration - and more importantly, your own personal enjoyment! If you do go into more detail though, I don't want to suggest you write it in any particular way, your own style is why I love your works so much, and if you do go into more depth with this, I'd be fascinated and thrilled to see what you might write!
Anyway, moving onto my next suggestion! I love how Barry grows out of the truck like that, it's so effortless! It really showcases how strong he is and how tough his body is even at this 'small' size! Now, I love it completely, so I guess this is more an addition than a change, but oh well! Again, it's all in the details! You know, what does it feel like as he gets bigger? As the cab gets tighter? As the walls creak and groan and begin to warp and strain against his growing, swelling bulk... As he tears through it, without even the faintest hint of effort on his part, overpowering solid steel through nothing but the growth of his own body... There is so much you could write about here, and I am sure that if you were to, you'd do a fantastic job! I've read enough of your works to know that, I have complete confidence!
So, moving onto my final suggestion, this is more of a general suggestion for this page. It's to add a little bit of movement and reaction, I know it's happening really quickly, so it's not as if every line has to have an action, but just a little bit might inject a little energy, you know? I will suggest one example which I think works quite well, as it also makes a bit of sense. Perhaps Barry could attempt to reach for the door to get out but gets interrupted by a growth spurt? Or perhaps he's too big by the time he can react? Possibilities, possibilities... Of course, that's only my suggestion, and you can use it or discard it as you wish, perhaps there's a reason he wouldn't. Whatever you do though, I'm sure you'll do a great job of it!
So, there you go, I think that's everything I wanted to say about Page 3 of 'Under a growy moon'! An absolute joy to read with a wonderful picture! You did a truly superb job on this, and I deeply thank you for it! Keep up the awesome work man! Until next time, take care and have an awesome night!
Barry is reeling from his sudden transformation; he's completely stunned, and quite understandably! Sure, the myths and legends of werewolves have been around for hundreds and hundreds of years, but they were exactly that: myths and legends. They weren't supposed to actually exist, to be real, yet here he is, sitting at the wheel of his cab, mutely staring at his hands in dumbfounded shock. However, before he can properly process this bizarre turn of events, his body is wracked with a new sensation - not pain this time, but something else, something different.
Then, just like that, he starts to grow! His entire body surges taller and thicker, his frame bulking up with newfound muscle as his height races upwards by the second, his clothes tearing apart as he rapidly grows so big the steering wheel becomes more akin to a child's toy than an important part of his vehicle! That comparison quickly becomes woefully inadequate however, as his growth continues with no end in sight, his enormous, hulking frame filling the cab to the brim with powerful muscle and thick fur! However, his mighty frame is too powerful for something as pathetic as metal to stop him! His new, improved werewolf body completely overpowers the cab's metal frame, bursting out into the night air, without even the slightest hint of effort, just the force of his own growth! Which is only continuing...
I absolutely love this page, it's utterly fantastic! The growth is just wonderful, the way his clothes draw tighter and tighter around his muscular frame, tearing apart at the seams as his bulk expands, the way the cab becomes so much tighter and cramped as his massive body presses into it, the way the cab is torn apart by his growing, hulking body! It's just brilliant! Now, I love this page - as you might have guessed! - but I've also got some suggestions that I think might help make this already fantastic page even greater!
However, before I get into that, I just want to take a little moment to mention that I really like the way you describe the feeling Barry experiences, you pull off an excellent sense of rapid pace without even mentioning anything about speed at first, it's a nice bit of showing and not telling! By not describing what the feeling itself actually is, it gives the impression that not even Barry himself has time to figure out what it is, other than the fact that whatever it is, it's not pain, before he starts growing! I do have a suggestion for the actual grammar of the sentence, but not the content itself, don't worry. The content's great, ha ha! Anyway, for the grammar thing, I think you mean to say 'process what happened to him before he felt something run through his entire body again.' rather than 'process what happened to him that he felt again something through his entire body.' That's the only thing I can see needing any sort of change at the beginning though, like I said, the beginning is great!
My first real suggestion is about the clothing. Now, I'll admit openly and honestly, that I am a real sucker for detail, and when it comes to clothing, I particularly adore details on how they're failing and stretching and tearing! However, as much as I like it, I do think it would just be a generally good thing for the story, it would certainly help show just how powerful Barry's becoming! Fortunately, it's basically been handed to you on a silver platter because lo and behold, the picture itself shows several whole scenes of clothing being torn apart by his growing frame! From his bulging biceps and cannonball shoulders shredding his sleeves to his shirt stretching across his chest, there's so much you could get out of this! For a really, really nice scene of clothing damage, I have to recommend 'Unchained' by JustBuckingham, which I thoroughly recommend you check out, it's absolutely awesome and I'm sure you'll like it! Besides, you can consider this repayment for being so kind as to link me to that picture, hah! Of course, that's just for inspiration - and more importantly, your own personal enjoyment! If you do go into more detail though, I don't want to suggest you write it in any particular way, your own style is why I love your works so much, and if you do go into more depth with this, I'd be fascinated and thrilled to see what you might write!
Anyway, moving onto my next suggestion! I love how Barry grows out of the truck like that, it's so effortless! It really showcases how strong he is and how tough his body is even at this 'small' size! Now, I love it completely, so I guess this is more an addition than a change, but oh well! Again, it's all in the details! You know, what does it feel like as he gets bigger? As the cab gets tighter? As the walls creak and groan and begin to warp and strain against his growing, swelling bulk... As he tears through it, without even the faintest hint of effort on his part, overpowering solid steel through nothing but the growth of his own body... There is so much you could write about here, and I am sure that if you were to, you'd do a fantastic job! I've read enough of your works to know that, I have complete confidence!
So, moving onto my final suggestion, this is more of a general suggestion for this page. It's to add a little bit of movement and reaction, I know it's happening really quickly, so it's not as if every line has to have an action, but just a little bit might inject a little energy, you know? I will suggest one example which I think works quite well, as it also makes a bit of sense. Perhaps Barry could attempt to reach for the door to get out but gets interrupted by a growth spurt? Or perhaps he's too big by the time he can react? Possibilities, possibilities... Of course, that's only my suggestion, and you can use it or discard it as you wish, perhaps there's a reason he wouldn't. Whatever you do though, I'm sure you'll do a great job of it!
So, there you go, I think that's everything I wanted to say about Page 3 of 'Under a growy moon'! An absolute joy to read with a wonderful picture! You did a truly superb job on this, and I deeply thank you for it! Keep up the awesome work man! Until next time, take care and have an awesome night!
Mmm hmm! Oh yes, yes, yes!
Absolutely wonderful job there my man, there isn't a single thing I could fault with the content! The only thing even approaching a complaint is a quick grammar thing - I think you meant 'ripped his sleeves to shreds' rather than 'rip in shreds his sleeves'? Heh, regardless, awesome job there man, well done! Well done indeed!
Absolutely wonderful job there my man, there isn't a single thing I could fault with the content! The only thing even approaching a complaint is a quick grammar thing - I think you meant 'ripped his sleeves to shreds' rather than 'rip in shreds his sleeves'? Heh, regardless, awesome job there man, well done! Well done indeed!
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