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OH LOOK A SCENARIO FOR TORA
Yeah after a long while of not having stuff out, I finally finish another scenario, and it's Torahiko's. So here, Hiro spends the evening at Tora's place and the two catch up to each other in the most unlikely of places.
Oh, when you're finished reading, I hope you know what's the next scenario to happen ;)
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Yeah after a long while of not having stuff out, I finally finish another scenario, and it's Torahiko's. So here, Hiro spends the evening at Tora's place and the two catch up to each other in the most unlikely of places.
Oh, when you're finished reading, I hope you know what's the next scenario to happen ;)
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Category Story / All
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File Size 12.4 kB
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I enjoyed their conversation at the bathhouse, and I do like this choice of menu; very in character for Torahiko.
So far I've been enjoying these, and am looking forward to the next scenario. I do feel the ending here was a bit abrupt. I suspect it's meant to be like the scene cuts in the game itself (and some of them tended to be very abrupt), however.
I take it that in this version Torahiko doesn't have Juuichi as another tester?
Oh, yeah, spotted a couple typos:
“Every tI would get flustered and turn away, contenting myself with the occasional glances”
Should be "Every time, I would..."
“Torahiko entered the bath with only nothing but a towel on his wait.”
Should be "waist".
Overall, good work.
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