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Compressing three scenarios (four counting the previous chapter) into one story. Might as well slap a "made in 7-zip" on the story :P
Continuing from the previous chapter, Hiro, Kouno and Shin go splurge before heading back to the house. Shin gets his mixer, and Kouno shows the photos he's taken so far.
Yeah, I took a scene that was in a dedicated route and placed it early. On the plus side, it makes room for more development so stay tuned :)
# One title I had in mind was Bad Apples but there was already a Touhou/Japanese mythology reference placed in there so eh.
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Continuing from the previous chapter, Hiro, Kouno and Shin go splurge before heading back to the house. Shin gets his mixer, and Kouno shows the photos he's taken so far.
Yeah, I took a scene that was in a dedicated route and placed it early. On the plus side, it makes room for more development so stay tuned :)
# One title I had in mind was Bad Apples but there was already a Touhou/Japanese mythology reference placed in there so eh.
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Overall it's a nice bit, and I do like that these three are more... comradely here, for lack of a better word. Specifically, that they don't constantly dump on Kounosuke.
One small typo I found:
”Since he would also be going Kounosuke’s house right after,”
Should be “going to Kounosuke’s house”
So far I'm enjoying these.
One small typo I found:
”Since he would also be going Kounosuke’s house right after,”
Should be “going to Kounosuke’s house”
So far I'm enjoying these.
"Reclusive moon princess..." I chortled at that reference.
Nice work so far, I love seeing this played out in the broad friendship angle
instead of the one sided dating sim that it suppose to be. Makes you really
connect with all the characters which is really nice and enjoyable to read.
Nice work so far, I love seeing this played out in the broad friendship angle
instead of the one sided dating sim that it suppose to be. Makes you really
connect with all the characters which is really nice and enjoyable to read.
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