What I'd like to know is what kind of story this is going to be, and what they'retalking about. I mean, from what I read it seems like they were driving home from a casino or something
They are driving home form a casino. The comic is an action, fantasy adventure type deal. One of the main characters is going to be introduced in the next panel...I tend to draw him often outside of this comic..>.>
Seems pretty good so far, no stagnant panels. If I had to critique something I'd say work on matching consistency.
The father's eyes are larger from the side then front when it's usually the other way around.
Thanks. Consistency is a rather persistent issue with me and I will make strides to see about making sure the characters stay consistent. Thanks for the critique!!
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