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I am a young writer, which probably, like everyone here, loves both writing and reading stories on various topics!
I do not limit myself to just simple reading and try to show other authors how much I appreciate their long and difficult path in creativity!
And at least let me try to prove myself as a real writer. I can't help but admit that I simply don't have enough experience and the passion for the upcoming work!
I'm constantly getting lost and I can't go on! Perhaps other young writers also face this? I have to put a dash on the work done and on the next sheet write a random passage that came to my mind that has nothing to do with the "main" work!
If among all the young writers who are currently present on the site, I would like to ask you to share your precious opinion for me about the work I have done before!
I don't need the number of views, but your criticism in the comments! You are welcome! Also support everyone to whom your words will really tell you a lot more than simple "Favorites"!
I do not limit myself to just simple reading and try to show other authors how much I appreciate their long and difficult path in creativity!
And at least let me try to prove myself as a real writer. I can't help but admit that I simply don't have enough experience and the passion for the upcoming work!
I'm constantly getting lost and I can't go on! Perhaps other young writers also face this? I have to put a dash on the work done and on the next sheet write a random passage that came to my mind that has nothing to do with the "main" work!
If among all the young writers who are currently present on the site, I would like to ask you to share your precious opinion for me about the work I have done before!
I don't need the number of views, but your criticism in the comments! You are welcome! Also support everyone to whom your words will really tell you a lot more than simple "Favorites"!
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Naughty Princesses: The Return of the Great Mother (G)
5 days ago
Not wanting to reveal information about the main antagonist while trying to fill in the gaps in her personal profile, I decided to make a concession and provide some background information about her past, which had a fatal impact on Equestria.
Regarding Discord's appearance in the fanfiction, based on the information I gained during my research on the concept of "alternate universes," I concluded that his existence was impossible due to the limitations I had set. In this universe, as well as in the alternative path of world development, Discord simply does not exist, and he is replaced by Inanna, who, like Discord, came from the world of chaos. However, unlike Discord, who was sealed in stone using the elements of harmony, the situation with Inanna is much more serious and has taken a completely different course. Unlike Discord, who was immediately sealed in stone, Inanna was not immediately sealed in stone. Instead, there was a fierce battle between Inanna and the Alicorn sisters. At the end, with the help of an ancient spell, the sisters managed to seal Inanna. They sealed her body in a shared altar. Moreover, by separating Inanna's mind from her body, it was sent into the depths of a dark, endless abyss, while her body was sealed within a diamond-shaped, six-pointed stone.
You see, this is not the first time Inanna has come to the world of Equestria. If you remember what was written in the Prologue, back when the cult was just beginning, Inanna was already sealed in stone, but the chaos creature's mind returned to its body, which means that it had been centuries since Inanna was sealed and the seal was placed to prevent her mind from returning to her body. Unfortunately, Inanna was unable to escape from the stone altar. Even after all this time, even if her body hadn't recovered from the wounds inflicted on her, Inanna was preparing to leave her prison, and according to her rough calculations, it would take her another couple of millennia to gather enough energy to simply escape from her prison, and even then, she wouldn't have the strength to simply escape, as all her energy would be focused on breaking through the seal, but she would not be able to win a battle against the Alicorns.
At the same time, a cult is forming around the altar, or rather the prison of Inanna, in which Inanna finds a way out. Although the seal continues to hold her inside, her powers are on the contrary, as there are loopholes in the seal that allow Inanna to channel her powers and create an army of followers. However, her desire to gather as many ponies as possible leads to a misunderstanding, as the ponies mistakenly believe that Inanna is calling for a crusade against the Alicorns, causing a panic and mass exodus. Well, then you know yourself.
Having spent more than two thousand years in the stone. Innanna accumulated magical energy while strengthening it with the faith that came from her followers. Along the way, the cult itself grew and expanded, becoming more powerful.
Let's summarize the results. Innanna arrived in the world of Equestria more than two thousand years ago. At some point in time, she was forced to leave Equestria. Then she returned, but was defeated by the Alicorn sisters and sealed in a stone altar. After several centuries, a group of random ponies discovered the altar, and Inanna saw an opportunity to brainwash the ponies, which she successfully accomplished. Over time, the cult of the "Great Mother of the Alicorns, Inanna" emerged. The Mother's Oracle called for a crusade, leading to a complete defeat and a panicked retreat. For the next millennium or more, Inanna and the cult spend their time in obscurity, plotting the overthrow of the Alicorns.
Regarding Discord's appearance in the fanfiction, based on the information I gained during my research on the concept of "alternate universes," I concluded that his existence was impossible due to the limitations I had set. In this universe, as well as in the alternative path of world development, Discord simply does not exist, and he is replaced by Inanna, who, like Discord, came from the world of chaos. However, unlike Discord, who was sealed in stone using the elements of harmony, the situation with Inanna is much more serious and has taken a completely different course. Unlike Discord, who was immediately sealed in stone, Inanna was not immediately sealed in stone. Instead, there was a fierce battle between Inanna and the Alicorn sisters. At the end, with the help of an ancient spell, the sisters managed to seal Inanna. They sealed her body in a shared altar. Moreover, by separating Inanna's mind from her body, it was sent into the depths of a dark, endless abyss, while her body was sealed within a diamond-shaped, six-pointed stone.
You see, this is not the first time Inanna has come to the world of Equestria. If you remember what was written in the Prologue, back when the cult was just beginning, Inanna was already sealed in stone, but the chaos creature's mind returned to its body, which means that it had been centuries since Inanna was sealed and the seal was placed to prevent her mind from returning to her body. Unfortunately, Inanna was unable to escape from the stone altar. Even after all this time, even if her body hadn't recovered from the wounds inflicted on her, Inanna was preparing to leave her prison, and according to her rough calculations, it would take her another couple of millennia to gather enough energy to simply escape from her prison, and even then, she wouldn't have the strength to simply escape, as all her energy would be focused on breaking through the seal, but she would not be able to win a battle against the Alicorns.
At the same time, a cult is forming around the altar, or rather the prison of Inanna, in which Inanna finds a way out. Although the seal continues to hold her inside, her powers are on the contrary, as there are loopholes in the seal that allow Inanna to channel her powers and create an army of followers. However, her desire to gather as many ponies as possible leads to a misunderstanding, as the ponies mistakenly believe that Inanna is calling for a crusade against the Alicorns, causing a panic and mass exodus. Well, then you know yourself.
Having spent more than two thousand years in the stone. Innanna accumulated magical energy while strengthening it with the faith that came from her followers. Along the way, the cult itself grew and expanded, becoming more powerful.
Let's summarize the results. Innanna arrived in the world of Equestria more than two thousand years ago. At some point in time, she was forced to leave Equestria. Then she returned, but was defeated by the Alicorn sisters and sealed in a stone altar. After several centuries, a group of random ponies discovered the altar, and Inanna saw an opportunity to brainwash the ponies, which she successfully accomplished. Over time, the cult of the "Great Mother of the Alicorns, Inanna" emerged. The Mother's Oracle called for a crusade, leading to a complete defeat and a panicked retreat. For the next millennium or more, Inanna and the cult spend their time in obscurity, plotting the overthrow of the Alicorns.
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