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This turns out to be part three of a story that started from Poetigress’ Thursday Prompt
The first was The Ascension Trial; http://www.furaffinity.net/view/800400/
The second was The Invite; http://www.furaffinity.net/view/854899/
So now it’s broken free of its cage and has now gained a life of its own and can be found rambling around the countryside. I’ve got just the barest of outlines in mind, so I’ll be adding to it as insomnia strikes. Posting a story as I go isn’t really something I normally do but, oh I don’t know, let’s just see what happens.
As always comments are welcome and appreciated.
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The first was The Ascension Trial; http://www.furaffinity.net/view/800400/
The second was The Invite; http://www.furaffinity.net/view/854899/
So now it’s broken free of its cage and has now gained a life of its own and can be found rambling around the countryside. I’ve got just the barest of outlines in mind, so I’ll be adding to it as insomnia strikes. Posting a story as I go isn’t really something I normally do but, oh I don’t know, let’s just see what happens.
As always comments are welcome and appreciated.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Category Story / All
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Size 120 x 118px
File Size 42.6 kB
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I definitely like where this has gone. You keep adding to and expanding the world very naturally; moreover, the characters are a lot stronger than in the first two parts. Not to mention, I no longer have to wonder whether they're anthro or not. ;) This is a very interesting series, I hope you keep working on it.
Thanks again. As for the characters being ‘stronger’ than the first two parts it may just be that they were only written as part of the prompts. Now that I’ve gone and created a much larger story around them I found it necessary to give them more than just a passing background. If you feel them being stronger now lies in something other than that I’d like to know, as it would be a hole in my writing.
No, I got the feeling that, at this point, you'd decided to give them life, and it really shows. I'd recommend going back to rewrite at least part 2 if not the first one as well, keeping in mind the things you know about your characters now. :)
Also, watch the 'trail' thing. :P Your first one was called "Ascension Trial", but you've misspelled it almost every other time in the stories. X3 Which I found charming, if nothing else.
Also, watch the 'trail' thing. :P Your first one was called "Ascension Trial", but you've misspelled it almost every other time in the stories. X3 Which I found charming, if nothing else.
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