Very beautiful and heartfelt.

Superb poem, I can imagine many of us feels the same way about mistakes we made in the past.

Indeed. ^^

'hug'.

That was beautiful man.

*sniffles* True words have never been spoken!!

*applause* That was amazing, Keenyfox!!! Ten out of ten!!!!

*blushes* I'm flattered :)

UuU Very Nice.

I really adore your drawing and this poem ;)

I really like how the drawing in particular came out ^^

Sometimes I feel I must do the same like ya. Really

Great minds think alike

Especially if they're a foxes XD

Excellent job, man!

You would make yourself a great author!

That's why I love to write!

I like to come up with ideas, but I get other people to help me write sometimes I prefer to illustrate ^^

I see! But it's so beautiful anyway! ;D

A marvellous and touching piece of pure poetry as well as artwork.

And they were selling the stuff on trial at Staples XD

pice poem and the work is a good complement too :3

With a few tweaks and an ill beat this could make a great rap. XD

Imagine it to something like this and you'll seee what I mean. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lvT1e5H0B4

Lol, if the rap is like De La Soul then it is all good.

Wow, I didn't know you wrote poetry dude and really good ones at that.
Felt alot of heart here since I'm someone who has regretted things I've done in the past.
Some people think your weak for questioning your decisions and you should always look ahead but if we all operated like that, we would never learn from our mistakes and grow smarter and wiser from them.

Outstanding writing, very easy to fav and I hope to see more from you.
(P.S. Loved the colors and your fursona with a stick and bag over his shoulder. It made the tone of the words really pop.)

Thanks :) I plan to do some more poetry relating to other things in the near future ^^ I normally would do songwriting but I have a substandard singing voice =P

I really like the art I drew for this ^^

Dang! Where has this been? I mean yeah I figured you'd probably have a fair handle on poetry being a musician n' all but this...I definitely wanna see more of this Keen! You sir have a good poet's soul:3

I need to show it more often then I suppose ^^

same comment as the one I left on DA your poetry is quite good.

That was great.

Hey, you have added this at when i though same, i'll leave my past behind me.

I have changed alot hard stuff in my life at this year of 2012, and now, 22 days before my 20th b-day, i see breaking those rusty chains from my arms and legs was worth it. Sometimes you need make big step to unknown..

So, all good to you in your way :3

I could hear the voice of some rapper in my head as I read this.
Heck, I reckon this could make for some great rap song lyrics!
Nonetheless this is a really heartfelt rhyme. Very touching.

True, after all rappers are poets with beats. ^^

I'm Blue song come to mind.

So long as it's not the 5-6-7-8's song XD

Thanks for posting!

True words that reflect what many of us go through at some point in our lives.

Great work as usual Keeny, especially since this is the first poetic work I've seen from ya. As a writer myself (working on some furry works as we speak) I give this exceptional kudos!

Thanks The best things we write seem to be drawn from our experiences!