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[inhuman] arc 10 pg 40
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Alien (Other)
Size 650 x 860px
File Size 1.06 MB
OH NO MORE PLOTTING DOCTORS. All of them, evil. Evil doctors everywhere, those poor crazy people.
Kyo don't feel bad I never check mine either, too busy being addicted to my own kind of drink :Y
Durty Angel's captain looks frightening D:
now that you're not in the actual process of arting may I critique something on this? :O
I apologize for critique yesterday as I didn't notice that till today, and I apologize for not keeping my damned mouth shut all today, I don't mean anything negative by it, but I will do my best to remember in the future :C
Kyo don't feel bad I never check mine either, too busy being addicted to my own kind of drink :Y
Durty Angel's captain looks frightening D:
now that you're not in the actual process of arting may I critique something on this? :O
I apologize for critique yesterday as I didn't notice that till today, and I apologize for not keeping my damned mouth shut all today, I don't mean anything negative by it, but I will do my best to remember in the future :C
Well I hope you get to feeling better! I know that sometimes I really don't feel like hearing critique too, and I forget that other people have those days too. :C
But, if it's okay now, the keyboard the AI emits and Ruri is using changes position in the last two appearances, and y0-5h1 seems to get taller/large in those too. This could just be the AI accomodating for Ruri's size but I felt it was notable :#
But, if it's okay now, the keyboard the AI emits and Ruri is using changes position in the last two appearances, and y0-5h1 seems to get taller/large in those too. This could just be the AI accomodating for Ruri's size but I felt it was notable :#
well the keyboard is supposed to change position, ruri doesn't officially begin typing until 'between' the captain yelling at her to hurry up (he interupts her train of thought) and the last panel. she only has about one sentance typed, it's a relatively realistic timespan for touch typing.
but yoshi's height is partly a problem due to me trying to angle the camera, but yeah. his height is a bit of a grief. i want to make sure he's actually visable in panels, but chuians arent' supposed to be taller than about average female human waist height. it presents some problems when trying to fit a tall character (like ruri) and a chuian in the same frame.
but yoshi's height is partly a problem due to me trying to angle the camera, but yeah. his height is a bit of a grief. i want to make sure he's actually visable in panels, but chuians arent' supposed to be taller than about average female human waist height. it presents some problems when trying to fit a tall character (like ruri) and a chuian in the same frame.
alright! so the keyboard changing position was actually intended- that's what I figured, but figured I'd throw it out there anyway.
Not going to complain at all about the tiny ruri figures, drawing non-humans that tiny is tough :P
Completely understand with that on the chuian. Just say it was adjusting itself for better viewing height, totally! It /is/ non-corporeal, after all.
That's really all I saw in this page, it was very very well executed :3
although it does seem that yoshi's left ear is larger than the right up near the top.
Not going to complain at all about the tiny ruri figures, drawing non-humans that tiny is tough :P
Completely understand with that on the chuian. Just say it was adjusting itself for better viewing height, totally! It /is/ non-corporeal, after all.
That's really all I saw in this page, it was very very well executed :3
although it does seem that yoshi's left ear is larger than the right up near the top.
i think the problem i have is that i find extended action sequences in film kinda dull and unrealistic, and i don't really read a lot of comics with extended action sequences. i'm trying to fill that gap. i've been rereading akira #2 which is essentially nothing BUT an action sequence for like 400 pages.
it's something i damn well better improve at, considering what i have coming up.
it's something i damn well better improve at, considering what i have coming up.
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