Alright, after much revision, and I mean much, like 2 days straight just editing and revising the old one and about a week working on the newest chapter. Thanks to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/helixthefallen/ for postive feedback on my last submission and http://www.furaffinity.net/user/arcticfatass/ for being my editor. It's worth downloading the .doc file. I'll have the .txt file up, but you don't get the italics and such for word emphasis.

Within these pages lies the reportings from Richard Ivanov, about recent events that took place at his facility. The incident revolves around a scientist named James Fields who captures a strange creature, but he doesn't realize her remarkable abilities until it's too late. Meanwhile, James is having troubles in his life, trying to find his place in a facility that seems more like a society.

Warning, there's some minor swearing, and non-graphic death, but it's pretty tame. Let me know if it needs to be moved.

Well, enjoy! I'll continue this over time.