Perhaps I may be accused of being "too lenient" in my comments, but I honestly don't see failure here. This is a very good rendering, from what I can see; I continue to see only improvement with every picture you produce. I'm very pleased!

If you say so... I only see a lot of mistakes with a lil bit of colour >.< I really apreciate your comments, they help me so much. I just wanna be someday as good as Wyndsong or like other awesome artits.

Any artist, writer, singer, performer... they'll tell you the same thing: They only notice the flaws. They could have had a brilliant performance, but they'll have something to say about something they did wrong. So the first thing to know is that Wyndsong, and I, and everyone else who creates anything will agree with you... we keep seeing the flaws.

Even so, it pushes us onward. We'll get better every time. We'll make changes, try new things, find better ways. So if something looks like a flaw to you, then you can work with it next time. I promise you -- it only gets better. Believe it.