Renee Carter Hall' prompt this week was "superstition," and I need to thank
vixyyfox too, because it wasn't until I saw the first few words of her submission that I remembered this idea. Inspired by the work of
tengu, I came up with this very bizarre bakemono idea. I mean, what bakemono isn't bizarre? Seriously, the Japanese have extremely strange ideas of what monsters can be and do. So here's my take on it. Set more or less in the Legend of the Five Rings universe, which has also inspired Omega Archer Ryouji, my current ongoing and very neglected writing project. Mostly, my aim was just to take a look at the gift-receiving ritual that L5R samurai have to go through. >.> Oh, and I mention OAR because episode 3 has been rewritten. I'm waiting for some feedback before I post it here, but anyone who's been reading it will have another chapter to go through, hopefully before too long.
Category Story / Fantasy
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Well then allow me to set down your kudos here in this fine place. I’m not at all familiar with Japanese lore and I got this quite easily. You balanced giving the story a background and advancing the action perfectly. I especially like how Kenzai didn’t quite remember the point of the story of the kasunoshiwotsu but followed the lesson’s warning anyway. Like all cautionary tales this one doesn’t need to be remembered perfectly to impart its moral code to the listener. Well done.
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