basicly a revised, and re-done version of an earlyer delelted submission, looking for critisisms, cuz I'm still not happy with it, yet I can't figure out the missing things, this time howerver, I didn't do it just cuz some one told me to, and I actually spent alot of time making beeps, ang georating effects, including the hit-tat, that was a bitch and a half (long story) but any sugestions? (ben anderson, I know I can count on you ~.-.^) but any and all help welcomed! and I mean any and all, I want alot! come on comment people!!! and if no, my aim, ICQ, MSN and yahoo are all posted if you'd rather call my stuff shit in person... I don't mind =P