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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVxZMuXKMeU&feature=relmfu @.=.@ Oh my days!
Anyway, this is for Azra with his permission I will get this coloured. Critiques? I did this off the top of my head, kinda proud without using references.
Anyway, this is for Azra with his permission I will get this coloured. Critiques? I did this off the top of my head, kinda proud without using references.
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 771 x 1000px
File Size 1.54 MB
This is great! A lovely pose!
Critique (since you asked an all ^^)
1) You should probably give the back a bit more mass if that makes sense? Round it to make it look more true to anatomy rather than her body being so straight. :3
2) A line to show the throat? :3
3) If her legs are human, I assume her feet are also, make the arch of the foot a bit smaller; they're a bit long at the moment.
4) You may want to reference the 'back' hand, if you haven't done so already. :3
If you like I could do a red line? Sometimes it a bit easier to understand than describing! XD
Bah, I don't like to give critique, but as long as it helps I don't mind... so I hope it helps!! XD
Critique (since you asked an all ^^)
1) You should probably give the back a bit more mass if that makes sense? Round it to make it look more true to anatomy rather than her body being so straight. :3
2) A line to show the throat? :3
3) If her legs are human, I assume her feet are also, make the arch of the foot a bit smaller; they're a bit long at the moment.
4) You may want to reference the 'back' hand, if you haven't done so already. :3
If you like I could do a red line? Sometimes it a bit easier to understand than describing! XD
Bah, I don't like to give critique, but as long as it helps I don't mind... so I hope it helps!! XD
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i.....5v5redline.png
I hope that's useful to you :3
Intercostels?
And no problem dude!
I hope that's useful to you :3
Intercostels?
And no problem dude!
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