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It's finally done peeps! Part three of a three part story, detailing the exciting origin of Cindi.
Remember to comment if you liked the story. :)
Written by the always alliterative:
vulpinehero.
Remember to comment if you liked the story. :)
Written by the always alliterative:
vulpinehero.
Category Story / Muscle
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 106.1 kB
I'll admit the end was a bit abrupt, but after the party the main thrust of the overall message is complete. The only way to really have drawn it out would've been to show Cindi repairing her friendship with Mia, and while that may have resulted in an interesting scene or two, it wouldn't have served much purpose and would've artificially dragged the story out. So thats not a problem as far as I'm concerned, and I'm very much impressed with how well Vulpine Hero did with the outline I gave him. :)
Well, thank you in any case, I really am glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I will have to find a way to tell the story of how Cindi and Anion met someday. ;)
Well, thank you in any case, I really am glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I will have to find a way to tell the story of how Cindi and Anion met someday. ;)
a great finale. woulda read it sooner, but i guess i lost it in my submission list. kinda reminds me of the morals from spider man, great power great responsibility and all. Looks like Cindi learned that the hard way. This was a great story to show how Cindi evolved as a character ^^
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the whole character arch. I'll admit that I didn't really intend any parallels to Spiderman when I wrote up the outline, but looking back I guess they are pretty obvious. Mainly, I just wanted to show that the whole event wasn't just some simple wish fulfillment session for Cindi. A lot of transformation stories read that way, and while I wouldn't say they're entirely off base, some hard knocks tend to make things a whole lot more interesting.
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