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LuridLogan you did a very good job, here's my suggestions :3
1. Put the arm behind the body a little more so you can show the body shape
2. *suggestion* add collar bones
3. slim the legs down a bit, *unless that's how they're supposed to look :3)
4. Little adjustments on the breasts
5. add muscle to the arm ;3
6. Adding tummy muscle really makes a piece look finished :3
other than a few easy fixes, it's a really good drawing!! :D
LuridLogan you did a very good job, here's my suggestions :31. Put the arm behind the body a little more so you can show the body shape
2. *suggestion* add collar bones
3. slim the legs down a bit, *unless that's how they're supposed to look :3)
4. Little adjustments on the breasts
5. add muscle to the arm ;3
6. Adding tummy muscle really makes a piece look finished :3
other than a few easy fixes, it's a really good drawing!! :D
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
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Size 540 x 720px
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