TTWG- Xizzy's new dress? Maybe?
:/ i think it looks cute
needed more flash then the original but i wanted to keep the same idea behind the dress,
(plus i wanted to add stockings X3)
What do u all think?
needed more flash then the original but i wanted to keep the same idea behind the dress,
(plus i wanted to add stockings X3)
What do u all think?
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Looks good....
Maybe tighten the corset a little in the chest area.
Then shorten the sleeves by the hand (diameter not length) so there is only 2 steps in the sleeves.
Put a pretty bow near her tail tuff, same colors as her dress.
And does she have her hair in a pony tail with a bow?
also see how she would look with out the stockings.
Just my thoughts...
Maybe tighten the corset a little in the chest area.
Then shorten the sleeves by the hand (diameter not length) so there is only 2 steps in the sleeves.
Put a pretty bow near her tail tuff, same colors as her dress.
And does she have her hair in a pony tail with a bow?
also see how she would look with out the stockings.
Just my thoughts...
it's a good design Xizana, but the dress's a tad busy. While it'd be good for a pinup, it'd take more time and effort for each frame of the comic. my suggestion is to simplify it. The stockings are fine, but the ribbons could probably go. The pocket on front from the apron would definitely work. try simplifying the front making the vest a button up if those ribbons are what closes it, though the big bow looks fine to me.
No offense but I was quite of the older dress design as it was cute, sexy and had a lot of class without being over the top.
I do hope this helps in some way. But a lot of manga artists I read up on try to keep character designs somewhat simple as to save them a lot of frustration and time redrawing them for every panel.
Just this kitsune's thoughts ^^
No offense but I was quite of the older dress design as it was cute, sexy and had a lot of class without being over the top.
I do hope this helps in some way. But a lot of manga artists I read up on try to keep character designs somewhat simple as to save them a lot of frustration and time redrawing them for every panel.
Just this kitsune's thoughts ^^
I was going to say something similar!
You will be drawing your character a lot so try to simplify things for your own sake. My character doesn't have clothes but all her markings make it so difficult to duplicate over and over!
And I love the stockings, keep those! Or maybe make them thigh high socks!!!
You will be drawing your character a lot so try to simplify things for your own sake. My character doesn't have clothes but all her markings make it so difficult to duplicate over and over!
And I love the stockings, keep those! Or maybe make them thigh high socks!!!
Damn, now that's a pocket watch. Actually, make that pocket clock... XD
The new outfit seems to be accentuating...some other things, as well... ^///^;;;
Much as I try to be chaste, the perverted side in me is going, "me wantz..."
That said, this looks awesome so far, Allie. Can't wait to see the new comic! (hug) ^w^
The new outfit seems to be accentuating...some other things, as well... ^///^;;;
Much as I try to be chaste, the perverted side in me is going, "me wantz..."
That said, this looks awesome so far, Allie. Can't wait to see the new comic! (hug) ^w^
Nice outfit! Lower the stockings a bit, tho, for a little of the ol' zettai ryouki...
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.p...../ZettaiRyouiki
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.p...../ZettaiRyouiki
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