Not large breasts? I like you

Thanks! X3 Never been a fan of them, to be honest. So, unless I think it reallyrequires it, most of my females are on the smaller side.

:D *hugs you* x3

Ooooh, I like that one a hell of a lot too. The only changes i would suggest are that the shoulders are a little too square for the feminine appearance - shoulder joints themselves perhaps a little high in the socket so to speak. And im not too sure about the expression in her face. I'm aware that expressions are usually the hardest part of any image though, so all things considered and with the time constraints you set yourself I'm not saying you've done anything so bad it's hideous (as i know you're probably thinking) I'm just saying it looks a little incomplete. i personally get the feeling she's standing their perhaps shyly waiting for someone she's going to meet, perhaps in a park with her back against a tree where she's taking a moment to enjoy a cool summer breeze. This is art, this is what i choose to see, even if it's not what you perhaps had in mind. I'm also not sure of the constraints with that hair piece either, to me it still looks a little stiff and unmoving. I would think with a little more time and refining, this could be a beautiful piece of complete art. Don't be so hard on yourself over any of these pieces, inner beauty is hard to get out in a visual manner, and all I have seen from you in the time since i met you, is great leaps and bounds towards your potential, and this timed 'sketch' only proves to me that you are on the right track, my love. <3

I think I'm following what you're saying about the shoulders. I could probably have lowered the collarbones a bit. That might have fixed it. And yeah, not too thrilled with the expression either. Overall I think I rushed the whole thing. I rather like that description! It fits with the pose and everything. And finally, the hair... Yeah... I've pushed that just about to the limits of distortion. It has some movement but not near enough to fully replicate how hair moves in wind.

second favorite with minimal things i find fault in

boo for flat chests :P

cace like the other one i commented on, seems to be almost all the same color. Maybe makeup pack or something? not saying make her a painted up whore or anything, but make some more color definition for us color blind people :P

longer render time :P im sure this could have benefited from that :P

bah! Bah, I say! XD

If I decide to do something like this again, I'll keep that in mind.

As for the render, didn't want to take /too/ long. Was on a time limit, after all. :P