Awhile back, I did a bit of a story, but realized it wasn't that good by how I wrote it. Well, I decided to redo it! Original here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6776755/
And if this one turns out to be a fail, well, I'm just gonna have to call it quits on it for now.

Thanks to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/arcticfatass/ for reading it before I put this up this time.

I'll try to make a .txt file later, but italisized words don't work in .txt files, do they?

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