Seems
Lazerus101 didn't quite read the label right ;3
please feel free to redline/critique as much as possible while it's still in the sketch stage! Any advice is always appreciated :)
Lazerus101 didn't quite read the label right ;3please feel free to redline/critique as much as possible while it's still in the sketch stage! Any advice is always appreciated :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 695 x 850px
File Size 174.9 kB
Looks alright so far, but...
http://i.imgur.com/o7bzM.png
Try to define your forms a little clearer - the palm in particular was a little small for the length of the fingers (it's roughly the length of the middle finger), and your hands seem to be collapsing instead of wrapping around forms. Don't be afraid of hands, they won't bite. The expression is a bit bland, but that's just my taste. When drawing arms, always exaggerate the contrast between the thick bit near the elbow and the wrist - it looks more natural than a straight line or curve. One thing to watch out for is the thigh on our left (his right). When it comes to colouring, don't let it be flattened, since there's a danger it might look deflated.
Apart from what I redlined, let's see. The ears are a bit inconsistent, I'm not sure what's going on there. One ear seems to have a different design than other other - try to imagine them in three dimensions when you draw them, instead of 2D representations. You'll get a more internally consistent picture that way.
http://www.petwebsite.com/rabbits/r.....59930Small.jpg
Some life drawing for rabbits will help you imagine the forms better, even if you abstract them down to cartooniness.
Keep it up!
http://i.imgur.com/o7bzM.png
Try to define your forms a little clearer - the palm in particular was a little small for the length of the fingers (it's roughly the length of the middle finger), and your hands seem to be collapsing instead of wrapping around forms. Don't be afraid of hands, they won't bite. The expression is a bit bland, but that's just my taste. When drawing arms, always exaggerate the contrast between the thick bit near the elbow and the wrist - it looks more natural than a straight line or curve. One thing to watch out for is the thigh on our left (his right). When it comes to colouring, don't let it be flattened, since there's a danger it might look deflated.
Apart from what I redlined, let's see. The ears are a bit inconsistent, I'm not sure what's going on there. One ear seems to have a different design than other other - try to imagine them in three dimensions when you draw them, instead of 2D representations. You'll get a more internally consistent picture that way.
http://www.petwebsite.com/rabbits/r.....59930Small.jpg
Some life drawing for rabbits will help you imagine the forms better, even if you abstract them down to cartooniness.
Keep it up!
FA+

Comments