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Comments: This chapter was originally much, much shorter years ago. After thinking about it, I decided that it would be better to focus on the children rather than the first main character who appears here. They're bit characters ultimately and I was sparse with describing their town since this is a location that will not be visited again. Not sure if I should come back and rectify that later just for pacing's sake.
Comments: This chapter was originally much, much shorter years ago. After thinking about it, I decided that it would be better to focus on the children rather than the first main character who appears here. They're bit characters ultimately and I was sparse with describing their town since this is a location that will not be visited again. Not sure if I should come back and rectify that later just for pacing's sake.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Western Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 17.1 kB
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