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Few see the value in remarkable pieces of technology, lacking knowledge of their potential, though when one does take notice, it raises the question of where such knowledge came from, especially within an emerging colony with scarce tertiary or Quaternary sectors. Ambition is in the blood of avali however, determined to achieve the remarkable with little in the way of resources...
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Dialogue and another character at last! Plot development! What a breakthrough! Names, dialogue and multiple characters were always the hardest for me to write, but the whole point of this account was to force myself to commit, even if the first pass is bad. This chapter along with upcoming chapters may start to get slightly longer as plot finally moves forward, which is a totally valid excuse for the longer periods between uploads... yep. As always, feedback is absolutely welcome!
First: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/63003553/
Previous: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/63640455/
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Dialogue and another character at last! Plot development! What a breakthrough! Names, dialogue and multiple characters were always the hardest for me to write, but the whole point of this account was to force myself to commit, even if the first pass is bad. This chapter along with upcoming chapters may start to get slightly longer as plot finally moves forward, which is a totally valid excuse for the longer periods between uploads... yep. As always, feedback is absolutely welcome!
First: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/63003553/
Previous: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/63640455/
Next:
Category Story / All
Species Avali
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 18 kB
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