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Rudy - a co-authored sci-fi story
*smiles... You might remember my TP journal about working with another writer. 
Jyoo_C_Froot and I were already talking about giving it a try around and about that time. I've known JC for a long time now.
For me, this is fun. When you find the right partner, it's more than simply hitting a ball back and forth across a net. In this case, we both like sci-fi, so there you go. It did take us a bit to hammer out our procedures, but eventually it came together.
If you like this, please let us know as that does help keep things going.
Vix
Jyoo_C_Froot and I were already talking about giving it a try around and about that time. I've known JC for a long time now.For me, this is fun. When you find the right partner, it's more than simply hitting a ball back and forth across a net. In this case, we both like sci-fi, so there you go. It did take us a bit to hammer out our procedures, but eventually it came together.
If you like this, please let us know as that does help keep things going.
Vix
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 111 x 120px
File Size 1.12 MB
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This gave me "Alien" vibes: people being sent to a distant planet for excavation, only to be ill-prepared for the dangers, and the superiors not caring. I got the impression that Rudy descends on ruins and wants to know what made the place such. I can't help wondering when Sam and MAVIS are in the same room, whether their physical forms will have an epic fight that could make a new crater or simulate an animal's entire mating season.
*laughs... your last thought caught me off guard, and I liked it. Being the way I wriite, I can't even tell you what 'might' happen, because I don't know. I did mention to JC that I didn't trust Mavis but, again, I don't know what will happen until it does.
Thanks for the read...
Vix
Thanks for the read...
Vix
The story was fantastic! I love the setting, and the characters so far. Giving AI some personality does help (which is I'm sure a lot of AI are given personality). I was kinda hoping he'd find another human still alive but maybe that just isn't the case.
All in all, a great start! I can't wait to see more!
All in all, a great start! I can't wait to see more!
You two have a strong premise going here. I'm curious for more.
I noticed that Vixyy's style is adapting to JCF's, making it harder to tell where her portions start and end. I love seeing such efforts by an author. It means they're dedicated to expanding their skills and range as a writer.
Good work you two!
I noticed that Vixyy's style is adapting to JCF's, making it harder to tell where her portions start and end. I love seeing such efforts by an author. It means they're dedicated to expanding their skills and range as a writer.
Good work you two!
"Vixxy doing Sci Fi?" was my first thought.
Then, it became, "Rudy, the anti-social ex-spec-op survives a corporate murder and inherits his own space sta..."
Then it (very quickly) became, "OOH... This is INTERESTING..."
Considering I read Pt. 2 already, this is absolutely top-notch sci fi, my friend. Keep going!
Then, it became, "Rudy, the anti-social ex-spec-op survives a corporate murder and inherits his own space sta..."
Then it (very quickly) became, "OOH... This is INTERESTING..."
Considering I read Pt. 2 already, this is absolutely top-notch sci fi, my friend. Keep going!
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