It's September! Which means Fall is on the way I think, I'm from the UK so I'm never sure but I know that it's getting colder and rainier than it usually is. And while I do love myself a Halloween themed TF, I thought uploading this would be nice!
This written back in July I think? In about an hour while on a roadtrip, I was on a roll honestly. I think the same few writing sessions in that week ended up producing about five different stories (this and Leading You being two).
I love couple TFs a bunch (cough), so I thought it'd be fun to subvert it with fission! And also a second person perspective? I like getting experimental while still like, making something I think a bunch of people will like. And also yes this one was named after the Coldplay song.
This written back in July I think? In about an hour while on a roadtrip, I was on a roll honestly. I think the same few writing sessions in that week ended up producing about five different stories (this and Leading You being two).
I love couple TFs a bunch (cough), so I thought it'd be fun to subvert it with fission! And also a second person perspective? I like getting experimental while still like, making something I think a bunch of people will like. And also yes this one was named after the Coldplay song.
Category Story / TF / TG
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 86.7 kB
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This is a very nice story! Fission is a pretty underused TF subtype, and I think it's rather unique you did it with this sort of end result. Especially since, personally, I think there needs to be more TFs out there of both Susie and Noelle!~
Also those mental change aspects were pretty well written, very satisfying to go through as everything shifted further. Overall, I think this looks great, and that ending was very, very sweet.
Also those mental change aspects were pretty well written, very satisfying to go through as everything shifted further. Overall, I think this looks great, and that ending was very, very sweet.
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