I have been writing this story for a few years now for myself. Now I want to try to release it out there, but first I want to see what people think! So, here is the introduction/prologue of the book "Furo" (Combination of Fur and Hero). Let me know what you think! Enjoy!

Note: A con-lang is used in this text. Translations can be found at the bottom of the text



Introduction

“Alright, you go this side, and you go that side! I will go straight ahead!” said a female voice.
“Where should I go?” said a male voice.
“Go behind him!”
“Tiger!” said another male voice out loud, on the right side and transformed into a tiger.
“Eagle!” said another female voice out loud, on the left side and transformed into an eagle.
The four were battling a dark entity in its throne room. The throne room was dark and gloomy. Barely any sunlight seeps in, and the room is lightened up only by candles. They have been battling for more than an hour, non-stop against the entity.
“dat-seEd atsn! It may look like you’re winning,” said the entity, with a menacing male voice, “but I am winning.”
They ignored his threat and continued to attack him with brute force, despite the bit of energy they had left.
“My Spirit can’t hold my form any longer!” said a female voice of the four.
“Just hold it! We are so close!” said the leading female voice.
“What is he forming?” said a male voice of the four.
The dark entity formed a large circle, like magic with his hands. The circle formed a portal that looked like it led to the sky.
“fedallann,” said the dark entity.
Then out of nowhere, small dark, quadruped entities pushed the four, into the portal.
“Noooo!” they all said as they fell into the portal.
As they fell, the dark entity said to them, “Like I said, I have won.”
The portal then closed into disappearance.



Translations:
"dat-seEd atsn!" - Fools you all!
"fedallann" - Push them (in)