sorry for the lower quality, couldn't fit the resolution limit hope yall like this mini-comic

Belt buckles can be a lethal weapon, better to just let the belly go free uwu

Bigger is better as they say x3

The quality I'm not gonna complain too much about. Because even I don't know how to fix that.

That aside, I did enjoy reading this mini-comic. It's cute, and funny. :)

Even if you have a better quality of it, I only have one critique. I don't know if I should tell you this, or not. Because it's a minor thing, and it's to make reading the comic easy to understand.

Is it Like the flow of where to go and read or just the dialog overall. Would love to know, and would really appreciate it

[I apologize in advance for a very long post, but I wanted to help, and to make it a little more clear. -_-]

It's mostly the dialogue box placement, and the direction as to where to read. Rather than the dialogue itself...
Granted, it would be nice to give characters a different way of speaking, but that's not the problem here. The problem is...

'Have the dialogue box that I'm supposed to read first higher, compared to the second dialogue box.'
I was a little confused [on the first panel] when I accidentally read Anubo's response first, instead of your [character's] question first.
And the same could be said on the second panel, of course in this case, the two boxes almost share the same height placement, making it hard to tell which goes first to read, [while yes, it could be the quality of the image but still] it's something to keep in mind when deciding to place them.
This is something that I learned when studying how to make comics[which I'm still learning btw]. To make it understandable in first viewing.

And in the last panel, this is more of a personal thing that I would do, to make the dialogue flow better. You can ignore this if you want, if what you have already is intentional [because either way is fine]. But I would've switched the placement of Anubo's question first, and then him second guessing after.

Again, I don't want it to sound mean, because this mini-comic is still good! [I forgot to mention this earlier, but from what I can see. I really like the art that you made!] And even if you can't fix them, it's just something to keep in mind when doing another comic in the future. :)

I really love the feedback as it helps me work on certain part of art. Never really done comics, so I'm glad this is something for me to correct next comic I make.

I'm happy to hear that you liked my response. With how long my last comment was, I was worried that it was too much info, or that it comes off as rude. I still wanted to help out with what I know as a reader, and a viewer.

I assume that this is your first comic? Then I'm impressed! I like seeing someone get better over time. I'm also glad that you're taking this as a learning experience. : )

Yea assumptions are correct, I'm more like thought/idea is perfect ,execution 🫠 not so much as I had hoped. sometimes I can't see it so I encourage any viewer/ other artists to give me their criticism and advise so that I can make them better

Ah that's interesting! The comic is not bad for first effort! And yeah, I always have that mindset in my head. Though mostly because of my fear of failure, by not seeing my mistakes before showing the art. Yes, I also do art, but I often feel like it's not ready for show. Meaning, that I'm training myself to get better. Not just in my art, but also in myself.

Which explains why I don't have anything on my account gallery [as of writing this comment]. Partly because of important things I need to work on IRL, but also, I feel like I'm not ready to show my art yet. I keep thinking to myself that "I could do better. I could do better."
[But maybe someday, if I have more time to work on my art, and when I am confident.]

Anyway, I'm glad that you heard my advise on making it better. And if I can, I am willing to help out when I can find something that you can fix, or to keep in mind in the future.
You do have potential, I can see it. : )

Good luck! And have a Merry Christmas!