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This is the first one that isn't word-for-word. I changed something that was culturally offensive, I was about 11 when I wrote this, and I didn't know at the time. My family can be quite racist so I probably picked it up from them.
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After lunch, Falco suggested they all collect fire wood for their fire later in the evening. They agreed, and now everyone was outside gathering wood.
“We’re gonna hava nice fire tonight.” Falco said as he watched the wood pile get bigger and bigger. It took only half an hour to gather enough firewood for two days.
“It’s a bit too early to start the fire right now. What should we do?” Firefox asked.
“Let’s take a joyride in the golf cart.” Falco suggested.
“Sounds good to me.” Fox said.
“Tottaly. Let’s do it!” Firefox exclaimed
Falco closed the door of the trailer while Firefox pulled the dirty white cover off the electric golf cart. Falco got in the driver’s side of the shiny, electric blue cart. Firefox smiled at the three “scratches” grafced on the side of the cart, and hopped in next to Falco. Fox and Denali got in the back, and Falco started up the golf cart. When they reached the end of the grassy “driveway”, Firefox turned on the built in radio. A rockin’ song called “Dynomite” was on, so they all listened to that as they joined all the other Happy Campers out on the road right now.
Holiday Camplands is a bustling camp ground chock full of hundreds of fun-loving animals on vacation. Located on the grounds, there is a Camp Store, two swimming pools, a couple of playgrounds, food courts, and a clubhouse. The group of friends visited all these places, and finally ended up driving around in all the roads near Bonanza.
“This is so awesome! I have’nt been in a golf cart for years!” Denali yelled over the loud music.
Falco turned down the volume so they could talk. “Yeah, but ya know what’s missin’?” Falco asked as he turned down a road with a caulasack at the end of it.
“No. What?” Firefox asked him.
“Donuts!” Falco exclaimed as he spun around in circles on the cauldasack. Everyone grabed something and held on tight. Suddenly, Falco skidded to a hault. “Clown car!" He shouted. Denali and Firefox switched places, while Fox took Denali’s place in the back. Once everyone was on, Falco did some more doughtnuts.
Firefox was having so much fun, that she accually loosened her grip for som adrenialin rush. But, unfortunetly, the “adrenialin rush” caused her to loose balance, and she began to fall off the cart. Fox reached out and grabed her before she could fall off completely. He held Firefox tightly untill she grabed onto one of the poles. Firefox turned around to thank him. Just then, the last beam of sunlight from the setting sun hit Firefox’s face, which brightened her eyes.
Fox stared at her, her silky red hair flying back in the wind….. he blinked. She’s so beutiful….. Fox thought.
“Thanks for chatching me.” Firefox said, but Fox was’nt exactly paying attention. He sat there as Firefox’s voice driped through his head like the sweetest honey. A romantic song was conviently playing on the radio now, adding to the moment.
Firefox waved her paw in front of Fox’s eyes. “Earth to Fox!” Firefox exclaimed.
Fox shook his head. “Oh, uh, you’re, erm, welcome.” He told her.
Firefox smiled her trade mark grin, and turned around to enjoy more of the dizzying doughtnuts.
After a few more spins around the cauldasack, Falco stoped in the middle of the circular street. Denali let Fox sit in the front for the ride back to the trailer. By the time they got back,everyone was laughing and playing around.
“Let’s order pizza.” Fox suggest once they got back in the trailer.
“Okay. I’m gonna get some salad. Yeah.” Falco said.
Firefox pre-ordered pizza and salad on her phone, which was the pizza place next to Ray’s Campstore.
After about fifteen minutes, they drove up to the pizza place in the golf cart, and then went back to the camper once more. On the drive back, Fox happened to be holding the pizza box. Firefox rolled her eyes when she heard Fox and Denali in the back talking about the pizza. Fox, obviously, was about to eat a slice.
“I have ears you know.” Firefox chuckled.
“We know. We were just hoping you wer’nt using them.” Fox joked.
“Ha-ha-ha, very funny. Now close that lid of that pizza box.” Firefox remarked.
“Yeah, Fox. Save some for Firefox an’ Denali!” Falco chuckled as he turned into the driveway of the trailer.
It had finally gotten dark outside, so they could make a fire now. Falco lit the fire while everyone else piled in some firewood. After they had a nice blazing fire going, the group found a seat by the fire, and ate their pizza.
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This is the first one that isn't word-for-word. I changed something that was culturally offensive, I was about 11 when I wrote this, and I didn't know at the time. My family can be quite racist so I probably picked it up from them.
---
After lunch, Falco suggested they all collect fire wood for their fire later in the evening. They agreed, and now everyone was outside gathering wood.
“We’re gonna hava nice fire tonight.” Falco said as he watched the wood pile get bigger and bigger. It took only half an hour to gather enough firewood for two days.
“It’s a bit too early to start the fire right now. What should we do?” Firefox asked.
“Let’s take a joyride in the golf cart.” Falco suggested.
“Sounds good to me.” Fox said.
“Tottaly. Let’s do it!” Firefox exclaimed
Falco closed the door of the trailer while Firefox pulled the dirty white cover off the electric golf cart. Falco got in the driver’s side of the shiny, electric blue cart. Firefox smiled at the three “scratches” grafced on the side of the cart, and hopped in next to Falco. Fox and Denali got in the back, and Falco started up the golf cart. When they reached the end of the grassy “driveway”, Firefox turned on the built in radio. A rockin’ song called “Dynomite” was on, so they all listened to that as they joined all the other Happy Campers out on the road right now.
Holiday Camplands is a bustling camp ground chock full of hundreds of fun-loving animals on vacation. Located on the grounds, there is a Camp Store, two swimming pools, a couple of playgrounds, food courts, and a clubhouse. The group of friends visited all these places, and finally ended up driving around in all the roads near Bonanza.
“This is so awesome! I have’nt been in a golf cart for years!” Denali yelled over the loud music.
Falco turned down the volume so they could talk. “Yeah, but ya know what’s missin’?” Falco asked as he turned down a road with a caulasack at the end of it.
“No. What?” Firefox asked him.
“Donuts!” Falco exclaimed as he spun around in circles on the cauldasack. Everyone grabed something and held on tight. Suddenly, Falco skidded to a hault. “Clown car!" He shouted. Denali and Firefox switched places, while Fox took Denali’s place in the back. Once everyone was on, Falco did some more doughtnuts.
Firefox was having so much fun, that she accually loosened her grip for som adrenialin rush. But, unfortunetly, the “adrenialin rush” caused her to loose balance, and she began to fall off the cart. Fox reached out and grabed her before she could fall off completely. He held Firefox tightly untill she grabed onto one of the poles. Firefox turned around to thank him. Just then, the last beam of sunlight from the setting sun hit Firefox’s face, which brightened her eyes.
Fox stared at her, her silky red hair flying back in the wind….. he blinked. She’s so beutiful….. Fox thought.
“Thanks for chatching me.” Firefox said, but Fox was’nt exactly paying attention. He sat there as Firefox’s voice driped through his head like the sweetest honey. A romantic song was conviently playing on the radio now, adding to the moment.
Firefox waved her paw in front of Fox’s eyes. “Earth to Fox!” Firefox exclaimed.
Fox shook his head. “Oh, uh, you’re, erm, welcome.” He told her.
Firefox smiled her trade mark grin, and turned around to enjoy more of the dizzying doughtnuts.
After a few more spins around the cauldasack, Falco stoped in the middle of the circular street. Denali let Fox sit in the front for the ride back to the trailer. By the time they got back,everyone was laughing and playing around.
“Let’s order pizza.” Fox suggest once they got back in the trailer.
“Okay. I’m gonna get some salad. Yeah.” Falco said.
Firefox pre-ordered pizza and salad on her phone, which was the pizza place next to Ray’s Campstore.
After about fifteen minutes, they drove up to the pizza place in the golf cart, and then went back to the camper once more. On the drive back, Fox happened to be holding the pizza box. Firefox rolled her eyes when she heard Fox and Denali in the back talking about the pizza. Fox, obviously, was about to eat a slice.
“I have ears you know.” Firefox chuckled.
“We know. We were just hoping you wer’nt using them.” Fox joked.
“Ha-ha-ha, very funny. Now close that lid of that pizza box.” Firefox remarked.
“Yeah, Fox. Save some for Firefox an’ Denali!” Falco chuckled as he turned into the driveway of the trailer.
It had finally gotten dark outside, so they could make a fire now. Falco lit the fire while everyone else piled in some firewood. After they had a nice blazing fire going, the group found a seat by the fire, and ate their pizza.
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