Montgomery "Monty" Johnston, a victim of the Bio-Fusion experimental process in 2009, a volunteer to become a racer in A.R.T. (Automotive Racing Tournament) as a way of showcasing the capabilities of Bio-Fusion, maybe even possibly selling it to investors. After the surgery, the process went well, Monty ran well, didn't show any problems at all. But that was until the race began, Monty began showing all sorts problems, like his engine overheating, his axel bending out of it's artificial frame, or his headlights popping. Problems that could be fixed with no problem, but on the 30th lap, Monty began showing critical issues, like blood spewing out of his side pipes, his windshield beginning to Crack and vomiting up oil after the last pit stop. After the Monty incident, the Bio-Fusion analytics team went underground, disappearing without a trace, for twelve years they went silent, until in 2021 when a rally was held for Montgomery Johnston, demanding justice for him and his family after the incident, one participant went to throw a brick at the town hall as a way of showing his distaste for the inhumane process, the injustice for Monty's family and himself as a human being. But things took an unexpected turn when an unsuspecting participant fell through the ground, without anyone taking notice over the rally. He ended up through an emergency door, finding himself in some strange hallway, looking like a hospital. He heard people coming down the corridor, taking off as an instinct to make sure he wasn't caught. Hiding inside an air duct, he looked down at this group of people what looked like surgeons, engineers and scientists moving something huge on this hospital bed, it looked to be about 9 feet long, he went to go follow them through the vents, tracking their sound with an echo. He heard what sounded like the pained screams of people, like as if they were being skinned alive. After following their sound he found them in what appeared to be an operating room, taking a closer look he noticed a wall of blueprints, knowing no what clue what they were for, but before he could piece it together the operators pulled back the tarp, and what he discovered was horrifying. It looked like a creature, it vaguely looked humanoid, the head looked like it belonged to a CRT TV set, looking like it were made of a red metal with one singular, empty, black eye, the body looked like it were a clay figure with disproportionate features especially with the legs, but the hands and feet didn't even remotely resemble that, it looked like metal slabs made of iron. The mouth didn't move but he could hear it groaning in pain, it looked like they were about to operate on it, but when the man went in to get closer he went through the vent gate, slamming onto the floor completely dazed. The operators saw him fall to the floor, getting the idea he were spying on them they picked him up then slammed him onto an operating bed next to the creature, screaming for his life, begging for mercy. But things took a turn when the creature began moving, groaning loudly in extreme pain, the man screamed in horror, an alarm went off as everybody began panicking, trying to get out of the room, immediately getting off the table, maneuvering past the others the man got out of the room, but looked back a couple times to see some of the people getting thrown out of the room against the wall, hearing the screams of the operators and agents mixed with the roars of the creature, running down the corridor until he found a room, without second thought he immediately ran inside, locking the door before finding a spot to hide. He sat there for what seemed like hours, it was completely dark, almost as if you could go blind. Hearing the screamed pains of the damned outside the room, combined with the powerful roars of the monster almost shook the entire building. But, after hours of screaming, it went silent, complete, utter, silence. He was ready about to leave the room until he heard a loud thud, then another, then another thud, it sounded like metal dropping on the floor. It was the creature, it was walking towards his area, immediately taking shelter behind a trolley to hide from it, minutes passed of the loud thudding, it went silenct once more, in complete suspense. Getting up slightly before the door went bursting open, falling back in terror, he watched the creature slowly enter the room, the 9 foot frame of the creature felt like a wardrobe was walking towards him with a limp. Watching this thing getting closer to him almost made him wet himself, he was about to scream before the creature's eye began flashing a light blue at him, luring him in like an angler fish to a prey, wanting to scream he was attracted to this flashing blue light, getting up then walking over to this 9 foot monster as he had no control over his movements. He sat there, staring at this flashing light until everything went dark, for 5 minutes there was nothing, completely nothing not even a flick, that was until the man saw a bright blue light in front of him, looking like the blue screen before putting in a VHS tape, even showing the time and date on the eye of this creature, 5/23/21 : PLAY. he even heard the whirring of a VHS tape inside the creature's head. What happened next appeared to be a montage, several montages and clips of what looked like a family of sorts, the father was holding the camera as he was playing with his daughter, cuddling with his wife, playing cars with his daughter. Bringing a tear to this man's eyes as he continued watching this heartfelt tape of a humble, happy man with his family, before the tape ended. He was confused at first, why did the creature show him this tape, how did the thing record any of that, and who was the man with his family, he thought about it for a bit, until eventually it all finally hit him, his mouth dropped in complete shock, this creature in front of him wasn't a creature at all, in fact.. the creature standing in front of him was... it was Monty.
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Back! The repetition of the operations, which cause more creatures to appear, unless I misunderstood and it is actually Monty again, is a good setup for the conflicts and the horror aspect of the rest of it, since the possible threats increase.
Also, the irony about the race, where Monty was perfectly fine UNTIL the race made me smile a bit, since to me it felt like he almost did that on purpose to show those who did that to him who is in control.
And the use of imagery and the detail of the descriptions is amazing, always a nice touch!
Also, the irony about the race, where Monty was perfectly fine UNTIL the race made me smile a bit, since to me it felt like he almost did that on purpose to show those who did that to him who is in control.
And the use of imagery and the detail of the descriptions is amazing, always a nice touch!
That's not it, the operations are being done on old, failed Bio-Fusion experiments that didn't go right, hence the pained screams the man heard while in the air vents, they were coming from different rooms and areas. And the race is where you misunderstood, nobody, not even Monty knew that he was going to malfunction during the race because the technology for Bio-Fusion didn't work that well at the time and was still a work in progress, on top of that the idea of turning a human being into a vehicle wouldn't work to begin with and Monty is lucky enough to even be alive and the operation went good enough at all. I bet you ten to one not even the operators themselves even knew it would work at all let alone go so well.
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