Thankfully this hasn't happened, but it was inspired by my visit to a lab a few weeks ago. My intention was to describe how wonderfully disturbing I find transposons to be, but I found I reached the 365 word limit before I could stumble over words trying to contemplate this weird, semi-sentient piece of DNA. I am glad for that, though; often I give up on writing because I feel like I'm trying to force meaning where there is none yet.
Also, about Richard Dawkins being a chicken—I found out his thesis was on chicken pecking behavior, so I thought, "Well, you are what you study, right?" Therefore he's a rooster like me! Oh, Dawkins, I really hope you aren't on FA...
Written for the Thursday Prompt. This week's word was "paste" and our entries were limited to 365 words.
Also, about Richard Dawkins being a chicken—I found out his thesis was on chicken pecking behavior, so I thought, "Well, you are what you study, right?" Therefore he's a rooster like me! Oh, Dawkins, I really hope you aren't on FA...
Written for the Thursday Prompt. This week's word was "paste" and our entries were limited to 365 words.
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Funnily enough, I went to a lecture some weeks ago and shared this little piece about DNA sequencing with him. So, darn, I might have only been the world's second genetically modified chicken?
And thank you; I really appreciate the watch! This is my second entry to the prompt. I submitted one a few months ago but I got scared and scurried away.
And thank you; I really appreciate the watch! This is my second entry to the prompt. I submitted one a few months ago but I got scared and scurried away.
Roosters are very underappreciated! I always found them to be very martial and fierce, which I suppose parts of Belgium agree with me on, considering the flag. I also appreciate any furry story that gives real life figures a furrification! Teddy Roosevelt as a bear for instance, something he would probably hate.
I appreciate the density of the text where it concerns the technical, though despite being very much a layman, I never found myself getting confused or lost. Preserving the gravity of a topic without getting lost in the details.
The dialogue moves very smoothly, and I appreciate the last line most. With a lot of writing I can put into words what I like and don't like, but when it comes to dialogue, I struggle. Sometimes it comes down to more how a sentence is constructed rather than what's specifically said, for instance: "Never the matter; get some wing gloves." is to me, very slick and good, if that makes sense.
Also, can transposons actually do that? Why is molecular biology so scary? First prions, now this!
I appreciate the density of the text where it concerns the technical, though despite being very much a layman, I never found myself getting confused or lost. Preserving the gravity of a topic without getting lost in the details.
The dialogue moves very smoothly, and I appreciate the last line most. With a lot of writing I can put into words what I like and don't like, but when it comes to dialogue, I struggle. Sometimes it comes down to more how a sentence is constructed rather than what's specifically said, for instance: "Never the matter; get some wing gloves." is to me, very slick and good, if that makes sense.
Also, can transposons actually do that? Why is molecular biology so scary? First prions, now this!
And France too, along with Belgium! After all, it was once called Gaul (from which we get Gallus, the scientific name for domestic chicken).
Voyur, my fellow avian, this was very kind of you! I appreciate the feedback, though please do not feel pressured to reciprocate my rambles about style—I just get easily excited. I'm not sure about the density and the dialogue; I struggle to write coherently and I'm not certain I succeeded. Nonetheless, thank you for your thoughts—now I don't feel as embarrassed about uploading this.
Our dear Theodore is, without doubt, a bear. I was also thinking that Darwin has to be a finch, or a tortoise. But I think I'm getting ahead of myself...
Yes! At least, I believe. The NIH has all sorts of protocols around handling any modified genetic material because they can (not necessarily will; it takes some effort to get cells to accepting foreign genetic material) leave lasting effects. Molecular biology, in my nascent understanding of it, is full of beauty and horror. Transposons, prions, viruses... they're all just molecules obeying the laws of physics, somehow, yet they seem so malevolent to us macro beings!
Voyur, my fellow avian, this was very kind of you! I appreciate the feedback, though please do not feel pressured to reciprocate my rambles about style—I just get easily excited. I'm not sure about the density and the dialogue; I struggle to write coherently and I'm not certain I succeeded. Nonetheless, thank you for your thoughts—now I don't feel as embarrassed about uploading this.
Our dear Theodore is, without doubt, a bear. I was also thinking that Darwin has to be a finch, or a tortoise. But I think I'm getting ahead of myself...
Yes! At least, I believe. The NIH has all sorts of protocols around handling any modified genetic material because they can (not necessarily will; it takes some effort to get cells to accepting foreign genetic material) leave lasting effects. Molecular biology, in my nascent understanding of it, is full of beauty and horror. Transposons, prions, viruses... they're all just molecules obeying the laws of physics, somehow, yet they seem so malevolent to us macro beings!
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