Why does he remind me of a villian from a different game or anime?

..i dunno xD

Oh well.

He almost looks like a moogle from Final Fantasy except he dosent have that thing on his head ^^;

lol

Darkness approaches...

Oh....he is cute! Your getting better with your English. There are only a few errors here and there but I still understand it all well. Good job. Keep it up. ^_^

lol...plz tell me my errrors

The errors are in this page and the others. i would have to re-read all the other comic pages to tell you what the errors were there but the ones on here are "My name is Beck. I came here to offer you a high position in my master's group. If you join us, you will gain more power to face those that defeated you earlier." "Oh? Now you have my attention..." The words that are highlighted are the corrections.

ok,thanks

i just notice that i for to draw his tail xD

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4345285/

xD

Great ending, but now it gets even more interesting:)

hehe thanks :D