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Basil Model Sheet: Perfection Game
Here's the initial character design and color for Basil. I'd like to try something called "The Perfection Game" to try and improve it. What I'd like you to do is rate this design on a scale from 1 to 10 for a cartoony Godzilla-like monster who's just trying to get home. After you rate it, tell me what you like best about it, and what I can improve in the next iteration. I'll rework it and post the changes, and this keeps up until I get a 10. Or at least a lot of 9s. Here's the first picture. Go!
Category All / Miscellaneous
Species Reptilian (Other)
Size 1280 x 969px
File Size 119.4 kB
7, I think the tail may be a bit too wide at the middle, even for a cartoon, and he winds up looking more like an iguana lizard with that lighter circle at the side of his head and the scaley lips.. but over all if that is what you were going for I think it's brilliant and wanna see him stomp'a city :P
The tail comes at me too. it should be wider at the body and taper down to a smaller bit at the end. Ideally it wouldn't drag the ground either. The large frills also don't work for me. If you want something, they should be smaller and continuous from neck to a point on the tail. If you're going for the 'zilla look, the head should be a bit larger too and have a more square muzzle.
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