My second poem, not as good as the first one, but I think you'll like it.
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Lara, a rose by any other name! Let's take a look at this newest addition to the magical repertoire of Wertyda456 poetry, shall we?
Fire haired maiden, wow! Starting off strong with a purposeful description of a striking beauty and a projection of strength through the ferocity of youth.
Dreaming.... there could be many things on her mind. With hair the color of fire, perhaps she is pondering the effect of this crimson shade on her perceived physical attractiveness to those that are within her circle of influence. The color of her hair seems to be one of the most important parts of her identity, especially as a 'maiden'.
She is questioning her ability to give and receive love, this could be the confines of a budding possible romance if she is interested in someone, or it could also be the typical feelings that manifest with coming of age within an organized society.
It's impossible to love you no less... maybe she is self-conscious of the color of her fiery red hair? Does she wish it to be another color? Or maybe she feels she relies on it's sex appeal too heavily, and wishes that other parts of her identity would shine through more often.
Ultimately the poem ends with her acceptance of her body the way it is, which is a very wholesome way to finalize internal introspection. It's a great ending all around! Everyone can celebrate the concept of embracing themselves as they are.
A feel-good poem in my opinion. Rock on, Wertyda456!
Fire haired maiden, wow! Starting off strong with a purposeful description of a striking beauty and a projection of strength through the ferocity of youth.
Dreaming.... there could be many things on her mind. With hair the color of fire, perhaps she is pondering the effect of this crimson shade on her perceived physical attractiveness to those that are within her circle of influence. The color of her hair seems to be one of the most important parts of her identity, especially as a 'maiden'.
She is questioning her ability to give and receive love, this could be the confines of a budding possible romance if she is interested in someone, or it could also be the typical feelings that manifest with coming of age within an organized society.
It's impossible to love you no less... maybe she is self-conscious of the color of her fiery red hair? Does she wish it to be another color? Or maybe she feels she relies on it's sex appeal too heavily, and wishes that other parts of her identity would shine through more often.
Ultimately the poem ends with her acceptance of her body the way it is, which is a very wholesome way to finalize internal introspection. It's a great ending all around! Everyone can celebrate the concept of embracing themselves as they are.
A feel-good poem in my opinion. Rock on, Wertyda456!
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