working on a few minor tweaks in my AU , one thing that is glaringly obvious is skewed gender ratios.

rather than spawn in more OC's that won't see the light of day I'm rethinking some of the older back ground ones where gender isn't as important for the story.

Togal is the first to get this treatment. his initial concepts was severely lacking in all fields.

a quick redisgun and Togal is no longer flat and soulless! .


she roll is still much the same as the original draft tho.

she's a complete suck up to Rysk and 90% of her opinions on things are what he tells her to think.

to the point where she thinks he's being hard done by when he has to face consequences for the blatant harassment he deals out to others in spades.

"Rysk isn't a bag guy!" she tells you and to an extent herself "you just don't know him like do!"


Togal is convinced that Rysk saved her life once. but Rysk is oblivious to when this could have been.

the truth is simply that Togal got extremely lucky on a mission Rysk was in charge of that tanked.
she was the only survivor of the team besides Rysk who could give less of a shit about the losses.


in his mind the mission was a success as the target was destroyed even tho it cost him nearly all of his crew.

no amount of evidence or explaining will ever convince Togal that Rysk was the reason the mission tanked and that he had no intention of even trying to save his crew (her included) when things went south.