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Just a short story about one man meeting Qualla Zezzune, the cute foxgirl
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Kitsune
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 12.5 kB
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Yeah the same here. The beginning kills stuff because you want to start with a frame and tell us things to a nonexistent person. Starting stories naturally is easier and often far more compelling. The repeat here is very problematic. Just constant I and she over and over again. A good fun idea, but its kept back from these problems. Normal wire hangers and no more page splitting.
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