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This is an original I wrote in 2004? ..no like 2006ish. maybe. The line "i've been broke for almost a whole year" was almost "four years" but i left it alone. It was originally called Failure Is The Future, but I like this title better.
Lemme know what you think!
EDIT: I say the word FUCK one time. general audience advisory :D
Lemme know what you think!
EDIT: I say the word FUCK one time. general audience advisory :D
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I like it! I'm not sure how to describe what I'd change, but there are a couple places where it might sound better to sing a slightly lower note at the end of a phrase. But the guitar is pretty awesome and overall it's good listening! (very post-modern blues or something, lol) It's really awesome that you make music! I can't read music but I love to sing and hear others singing <3
Thank you so much, criticism is not something I get often, tho I do appreciate it. Yeah, my air intake wasn't 100% the day I recorded this which does effect my vocals quite a bit, especially on the last note. I used to read music and I can now... I just can't immediately play the notes upon seeing them.
Thanks for all the favs :D When I get more recorded I will keep you posted.
Thanks for all the favs :D When I get more recorded I will keep you posted.
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