Contributions to the DBU often bordered on the mean-spirited (it was a "zap" apa, after all). But sometimes I grew tired of the same old "can you top this?" humiliation/pain infliction-type zap and wanted to do something different.
Although I was using Johnny Amburn's characters (plus a cameo appearance by Dirk Martine's Watchful character in panel 4), I was really putting my own characters 'Trep and 'Pasha through more discomfort that either of his...
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Although I was using Johnny Amburn's characters (plus a cameo appearance by Dirk Martine's Watchful character in panel 4), I was really putting my own characters 'Trep and 'Pasha through more discomfort that either of his...
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I sort of combined the "broken vertebrae/jaw" verses in the second panel. The way my Dad used to sing it was:
"He kissed me as we parted,
So hard that he broke my jaw;
I could not speak to tell him
He'd forgot his mackinaw."
Also, since 'Trep never wears clothes anyway, ("WHAT vest?") that verse seemed redundant.
"He kissed me as we parted,
So hard that he broke my jaw;
I could not speak to tell him
He'd forgot his mackinaw."
Also, since 'Trep never wears clothes anyway, ("WHAT vest?") that verse seemed redundant.
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