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Unbeknownst to a certain Eevee, today marks the day of his third birthday, a fun-filled day that's bound to be full of special surprises for the little toddler.
My own birthday is less than three weeks away, so this cute little idea came to mind for a story. Enjoy!
My own birthday is less than three weeks away, so this cute little idea came to mind for a story. Enjoy!
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Pokemon
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File Size 46.9 kB
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It is fun reading these stories and seeing how you utilize a reliable theme of events that occur from start to finish. What makes it special is, with a degree of predictability, your fans need not ever fear reading a story that will not be satisfying. Another great part of your technique is how you make specific elements of your stories play themselves out. They all start at different points given, from what I can tell, character-driven 'triggers' that determine when, how, and why they happen and in what order.
I mention this as, for me, I always struggled with how to make sure I could write a good story that did not feel like it was lacking its own uniqueness. Your stories show, to me, how much I have been losing precious creativity time by overthinking something that does not require such time to be spent worrying about. So, in short, thank you. :)
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You excel in showing the 'loving family'. Whether it is a full-on 'nuclear family', single parent, brother and sister, or no siblings at all, you really make it work to where it is known 'love' is a major part of the overall dynamic of your protagonist's adventure.
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As for the 'kinky stuff', you do well in finding new ways to have it happen based on creative situations and/or individual characteristics.
For example, our birthday boy using his brand new rocking horse to steady and position himself to get out what needed to be got out.
Another example, as I'm very partial to VULLABY, is how 'she' controls every aspect of her diaper usage. She may not yet be ready for potty training, but she certainly knows she is in good hands and cared about between her mother and SWANNA. She feels only love and warmth from these two supports in her life and, with that much support, it is no wonder the neighbors and nearby Pokemon do not phase her with their stares, looks of disgust, etc. She's happy and, should something not go happily for her, she has SWANNA and/or her mom. (I'm still trying to get a VULLABY for Pokemon Go. Problem is you need to hatch them from 12 km eggs and, sadly, I never seem to find Go Team Rocket Leaders who may drop them.).
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Last fun point is how this little EEVEE just turned 3 and has not the care for growing up. If anything, I'd say this birthday only reinforced how being a lovable lil' diaper butt is the way to go until he comes across his next birthday. The only thing, given how this day went, in which may even convince him otherwise is performing a continual series of super fun rewards / experiences for making it to the potty and being excited about starting school. Fortunately, as mentioned above, your 'family dynamics' work so well that, in the end, the toddler is in good shape and has no reason to not smile. :)
I mention this as, for me, I always struggled with how to make sure I could write a good story that did not feel like it was lacking its own uniqueness. Your stories show, to me, how much I have been losing precious creativity time by overthinking something that does not require such time to be spent worrying about. So, in short, thank you. :)
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You excel in showing the 'loving family'. Whether it is a full-on 'nuclear family', single parent, brother and sister, or no siblings at all, you really make it work to where it is known 'love' is a major part of the overall dynamic of your protagonist's adventure.
***
As for the 'kinky stuff', you do well in finding new ways to have it happen based on creative situations and/or individual characteristics.
For example, our birthday boy using his brand new rocking horse to steady and position himself to get out what needed to be got out.
Another example, as I'm very partial to VULLABY, is how 'she' controls every aspect of her diaper usage. She may not yet be ready for potty training, but she certainly knows she is in good hands and cared about between her mother and SWANNA. She feels only love and warmth from these two supports in her life and, with that much support, it is no wonder the neighbors and nearby Pokemon do not phase her with their stares, looks of disgust, etc. She's happy and, should something not go happily for her, she has SWANNA and/or her mom. (I'm still trying to get a VULLABY for Pokemon Go. Problem is you need to hatch them from 12 km eggs and, sadly, I never seem to find Go Team Rocket Leaders who may drop them.).
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Last fun point is how this little EEVEE just turned 3 and has not the care for growing up. If anything, I'd say this birthday only reinforced how being a lovable lil' diaper butt is the way to go until he comes across his next birthday. The only thing, given how this day went, in which may even convince him otherwise is performing a continual series of super fun rewards / experiences for making it to the potty and being excited about starting school. Fortunately, as mentioned above, your 'family dynamics' work so well that, in the end, the toddler is in good shape and has no reason to not smile. :)
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