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First to show their colors? AQUARIUS! I figured Aquarius is about the closest to a second in command and perhaps the most experienced at this kind of thing so she goes first. I hope she knows what she's doing.
The main challenge with the bottom half of this page was trying not to sound repetitive by saying "magic" over and over again.
What do you think of me giving a clue to what you'll be seeing on the next page? Good or bad? We'll try for next time so you'll be seeing how Chops reacts to what is going on.
Enjoy!
First to show their colors? AQUARIUS! I figured Aquarius is about the closest to a second in command and perhaps the most experienced at this kind of thing so she goes first. I hope she knows what she's doing.
The main challenge with the bottom half of this page was trying not to sound repetitive by saying "magic" over and over again.
What do you think of me giving a clue to what you'll be seeing on the next page? Good or bad? We'll try for next time so you'll be seeing how Chops reacts to what is going on.
Enjoy!
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 841 x 1280px
File Size 1.45 MB
Another nitpick, personal not procedural, Ghoul seems to be a Donkey and a Bad guy at the same time. As Donkeys are the symbol of the Democratic Party, this may be a message that Democrats are bad guys. Granted, this may be reading something in that is not there, but as a Democrat myself, I see these things when perhaps I do not need to.
Picking him as a donkey has not political reasoning at all.
The word Ghoul comes from an arabic wod Ghul which were undead monsters with the hooves and ears of donkeys and would feast on the dead and bring curses. That's where I got the idea to use a donkey. I've got some other reasons too but they don't have anything to do with politics either.
The word Ghoul comes from an arabic wod Ghul which were undead monsters with the hooves and ears of donkeys and would feast on the dead and bring curses. That's where I got the idea to use a donkey. I've got some other reasons too but they don't have anything to do with politics either.
I like how some of the goofs that they are doing (continually shooting at the bad guy even though it does no good, or yelling out at them from behind instead of just zapping) look like the silly stuff that happened in old style comics, but really does have a tactical use. Gunshots would clear a crowd pretty quick whereas superpowers might keep their attention. Good job, and I am glad that the action is beginning.
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