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I think this is my best one to date! Sure, the arms are still a bit thin and the torso is a bit too curved, but it looks decent enough.
Attempted:
Using a Different Pencil for the Sketch Work
More Realistic Facial Features
Inking the Body and Features
Black and White Coloring
Self Critiques:
Noodly Arms
Left Leg Too Big
Hair Needs Work
I attempted some Shading. No idea if it worked.
The Torso is Too Curved
Feet and Hands need Work
Other Critiques:
Torso Too Long
Need to extend the foot down a bit and use a line to turn it into a shoe.
I still think it looks pretty decent, though.
Attempted:
Using a Different Pencil for the Sketch Work
More Realistic Facial Features
Inking the Body and Features
Black and White Coloring
Self Critiques:
Noodly Arms
Left Leg Too Big
Hair Needs Work
I attempted some Shading. No idea if it worked.
The Torso is Too Curved
Feet and Hands need Work
Other Critiques:
Torso Too Long
Need to extend the foot down a bit and use a line to turn it into a shoe.
I still think it looks pretty decent, though.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Human
Species Human
Size 960 x 1280px
File Size 219.8 kB
Listed in Folders
Looking much better! I'd say that the arms are pretty long, and could be a little wider- as well as, where the legs join is something to look at. I'm not sure exactly how to explain it, but instead of a flat line there, the lines for the inner legs should curve into eachother at the top, I think.
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