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Like, what's actually happening. The situation is very unclear. The first three pages and this page don't really match, I guess? The first three pages flow together with a logical sequence of events. One event flows into the next in a way that makes sense. Page 4 doesn't conflict with Page 3 or Page 5, but it also doesn't bridge the gap between them.
It appears more things were happening "behind-the-scenes", so to speak, than were obvious. So maybe a bit of prose or even an outline explaining what's been occurring off-panel would help? It's also entirely possible that I'm missing something obvious, but I just can't figure out how the events depicted in the first three pages led to the events depicted here.
It appears more things were happening "behind-the-scenes", so to speak, than were obvious. So maybe a bit of prose or even an outline explaining what's been occurring off-panel would help? It's also entirely possible that I'm missing something obvious, but I just can't figure out how the events depicted in the first three pages led to the events depicted here.
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