*hugs his tightly and nuzzles* I feel really bad for him... I can't imagine what that must feel like.....

For sure is not the most pleasant feeling in the word... that's sure

Its probably one of the worst feelings..... *squeezes him until he poofs*

LOL, I hope you didn't summit it to your professor with "forgive" instead of "forget".

I did man, it's humilliant >_<

Well, I hope he got a chuckle out of it

Oh, come on! You can't see me now, but my face is brilliant red since I discovered that stupid mistake... >_<

ahh, I'm sorry, but you gotta admit it's funny.

well, if I was one of the people who are reading, I'd probably find it funny ^^U Probably... (Each day i'm more and more sure that I'll never get to talk English correctly).

Oh... that was one hell of a typo then...

For sure... I'd denounce a newspaper that says that the death people "won't be forgiven"... But please... no more comments about that, it's VERY embarrasing

Great project, and loved this series Corgi. Excellente!

Thank you very very much :)

You're more than welcome!

Oh, that's so sad.

It was a great little comic. :)

Thank you very much! :)

Hahahaha! Yeah, It's the bad part of not having English like first languaje... Sólo espero que el profesor no pensara mal de mí al leer "Nunca te perdonaremos" en lugar de "nunca te olvidaremos" XDDDD

No lo sabías? Bueno, es normal, en FA uso MUY poco el español porque tu sabes, con el inglés llegas más a todo el mundo. Soy de Sevilla, al sur de España.

Chipre :O Como mola. Este año, que estoy de intercambio aunque el miercoles regreso a España, he hecho un buen amigo que es de Chipre.

Espero verte por el messenger! (aunque en estos días voy a estar muy atareado, pero espero verte pronto!)

oh boy, thats a bad ending :(
nice comic the ending really surprised me in a positive way
thats nothing you can imagine really, epic end :)

Thank you very much! I'm happy you didn't expect the ending, man ^^

Triste, uh? :cry perder a tu ser amado debe ser tan doloroso!

I just wanna give him a hug

Yea, the poor need a big hug :(

Wow... impressive work. I would grade it very high <3

I hope the teacher thinks the same! >_< Thanks!

Fantastic work! You used a lot of cool shading and techniques (like the line of light in the fifth page) that really showed your skill, as well as your ability to create interesting characters and character design. And on top of that, a well-written short story! I hope you get the great grade you deserve :) Good luck!

Thank you very much! I'm really happy you like, and I hope I get a good grade for it >_<. Thanks!

HO HO sweet comic.. X3.. Love the story and those nightmerish dudes that appear is alan's dream D:

Good to see your work again :3

Thank you Sip! I'm happy you like it :)

That's a really good comic. Although curious, is the girl and the second name in the paper a reference to anything?

Thank you! Really not, they aren't. Andrew Smith was choosen like a random name, and Eleonor... I chose it because is a really beautiful name, and I liked how it sound with the surname "Campbell", but they aren't a reference to anyone.

What about the creepy girl from the dream? Or did I miss something?

She's nameless, a product of the imagination of Allan in his dream.

Gotcha. :)