Based heavily on http://www.furaffinity.net/view/366557/ (which I think is the absolute sexiest and most beautiful thing I have ever seen), Im trying to learn to draw better. The e-pencil sketch of this looks a bit better, since the lines dont want to be clean with painter 9... Im still learning how to digitally ink... teaching myself, mainly...

Not really sure what else to say. I'd like a critique... harsh if it needs to be, just not insulting.