Translate from French:
1.page 1. panel:
Mona: Nice place. Do you have any visitors?
3. panel
Mona: Oh so! Not even women like me?
2.page 2. panel:
Mona: I... I loved one man, but he broke my heart few years ago.
4., 5. and #
Mona: It's long story, but I will tell you. His name was Nate Bowen, he was fox like me and he is captain of Air Pirate like you. One day when he try blunder my home he met me. I was young student and I had 16 and I never met Air Pirate in my life. I only read about them.

1. page: Who watch the episode The Ransom of Red Chimp from Talespin so you know what happen him there. If not so go and watch that.
2.page: Story telling by Mona. Meet my new OC for this story Nate Bowen.

Before you start read her story and critize the character let me say something: I try hard to thing what will be her past. I had many version for her, but it was hard for me since I read a lot of article about Marry Sues what is wrong for past to write. As for me as creator/writer/artist is really hard write character biography background. My friend last year critize Nymphaemon from Nymphaemon and The Seven Death Generals , that she is Marry Sue due the scene with Leomon, who didn't kill her. But it was just parody on SnowWhite and the 7 dwarves, but unfortunately I stopped work on this comic story last year and I dunno if I return finish this comic.*sigh* For Mona I choose this version so let's hope is not Marry Suesish. Ok let's ignore my comment what I wrote and read the comic.

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Don Karnage belongs to Disney
Mona & Nate Bowen belongs to myself