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[COM] Shiny Got Patched! 🩹 - Marc to Mr.Patch TF
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ShinyTotodude
Seems Shiny stole a TF ray gun, but he hasn't handled it carefully!
He wanted to have fun trying it on someone else, but he ended trying it on himself: seems he had fun anyway! ^.=.^
He became Mr.Patch from Banjo Kazooie games serie
Very fun and long commission for ShinyTotodude ^^
From the same serie
Playing with inflatables > http://www.furaffinity.net/view/33375699/
Mr. Patch Inflating > https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33390539/
ShinyTotodudeSeems Shiny stole a TF ray gun, but he hasn't handled it carefully!
He wanted to have fun trying it on someone else, but he ended trying it on himself: seems he had fun anyway! ^.=.^
He became Mr.Patch from Banjo Kazooie games serie
Very fun and long commission for ShinyTotodude ^^
From the same serie
Playing with inflatables > http://www.furaffinity.net/view/33375699/
Mr. Patch Inflating > https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33390539/
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 899px
File Size 516.3 kB
I've been so-so. My Totodile mascot surely has had better times than this silly Slowpoke guy who is hurting himself and stuff. But I'm glad that at least I got to finally give everybody around proper feedback comments like I had planned, I created a raffle lately and I am currently organizing files on my computer for safety copies. I feel well. =3
Hope things are even better for everybody else. =D
Hope things are even better for everybody else. =D
That's surely interesting as an observation. It seems as if his vest and wristband got sucked up in the rubber somehow along with his whole being, but he slipped out of his neckerchief and headphones. I'm sure he'll get them once that TF's power runs out on its own.
Wanna express again how happy I am over the lucky oppurtunity that you were open for the offer of buying an art commission from you, Ladone. I had a great communication and think that you did amazing with this series of gorgeous illustrations based of my happy-go-lucky Totodile mascot and one of my favorite bosses in video games, Mr.Patch.
I love the toyish and bouncy nature to his movements, the sheer size that he reaches by inflating himself, the cool beachball blowing ability and of course the music that gives it a spectacle feel in the big top. It's loads of fun that you used a bunch of such elements here. We see Shiny running outside said tent, not knowing where he got that ray from (I doubt though that Shiny would have stolen anything, moreso delivering it orbeing on the way to use it for an errand job) but it's neato that it got the same data as the Mr. Patch gun saved here.
As said before, you got a great sense for mimic and gestures, making it easy to follow the plot in your sequences. Each time that I look at this one, it's hard to not struggle between if one should feel sorry for poor lil Shiny stumbling and dropping the invention, getting hit in the process by the ray which has quite the puffing results and changes in storage, or if you just get taken in by how neat the progression in said changes looks. The results are impressive definitely.
In terms of designs, you did greatly with redrawing Shiny. His colors might match more the classic GameBoyColor Shiny tone but that's close enough still. I say you did wonderful there. I also love how Shiny-Patch looks a bit more Crocodilian in his head shape, giving him a unique appearance. =3
Lastly, the coloring in general looks superpretty. It got a bit of a crunchy feel to it but still looks controlled and applied with much love and care. It's also nice how well the outlines and lights are looking either. Shows how much experience you collected with such works. Makes me happy that I chose this one over the digital option in this specific case (though I'm sure that would have looked nice eitherway, too).
I try to keep myself a little shorter in the other two submissions of drawing compilations, but say that this initial first set of pages is super, Ladone and I'm thanking you for that you were willing to do such extra pages after some time of waiting and more communications.
I love the toyish and bouncy nature to his movements, the sheer size that he reaches by inflating himself, the cool beachball blowing ability and of course the music that gives it a spectacle feel in the big top. It's loads of fun that you used a bunch of such elements here. We see Shiny running outside said tent, not knowing where he got that ray from (I doubt though that Shiny would have stolen anything, moreso delivering it orbeing on the way to use it for an errand job) but it's neato that it got the same data as the Mr. Patch gun saved here.
As said before, you got a great sense for mimic and gestures, making it easy to follow the plot in your sequences. Each time that I look at this one, it's hard to not struggle between if one should feel sorry for poor lil Shiny stumbling and dropping the invention, getting hit in the process by the ray which has quite the puffing results and changes in storage, or if you just get taken in by how neat the progression in said changes looks. The results are impressive definitely.
In terms of designs, you did greatly with redrawing Shiny. His colors might match more the classic GameBoyColor Shiny tone but that's close enough still. I say you did wonderful there. I also love how Shiny-Patch looks a bit more Crocodilian in his head shape, giving him a unique appearance. =3
Lastly, the coloring in general looks superpretty. It got a bit of a crunchy feel to it but still looks controlled and applied with much love and care. It's also nice how well the outlines and lights are looking either. Shows how much experience you collected with such works. Makes me happy that I chose this one over the digital option in this specific case (though I'm sure that would have looked nice eitherway, too).
I try to keep myself a little shorter in the other two submissions of drawing compilations, but say that this initial first set of pages is super, Ladone and I'm thanking you for that you were willing to do such extra pages after some time of waiting and more communications.
Thank you for you kind words! ^////^
I always do my best in my works, and you gave me good advices and ideas as well!
In the end, you contributed to the final result as much as I did.
Maybe someone gave him the ray gun just to keep it, but he inadvertently used it.. on himself X3
About the colors: I always use the closer I have to the real ones, unless I think the pencil is not enough to finish all the drawings I have to do in the commission.
That was the most similar to Shiny's body.
There are 2 canon version of Mr.Patch, so I decided to use both as references and create my version taking elements fom both the canon ones
Coloring is a very fun part of the drawing: It is very important with inflatables to give their shiny appearance
I always do my best in my works, and you gave me good advices and ideas as well!
In the end, you contributed to the final result as much as I did.
Maybe someone gave him the ray gun just to keep it, but he inadvertently used it.. on himself X3
About the colors: I always use the closer I have to the real ones, unless I think the pencil is not enough to finish all the drawings I have to do in the commission.
That was the most similar to Shiny's body.
There are 2 canon version of Mr.Patch, so I decided to use both as references and create my version taking elements fom both the canon ones
Coloring is a very fun part of the drawing: It is very important with inflatables to give their shiny appearance
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