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I added some minor details to their faces, let me know if you like it!
- Added a bit of an edge to their noses, which should look them more feline!
- Heart-shaped, domestic cat noses (only in the last panel as a test)
- Jake got some stubbly hair on his muzzle, which should look like a 3-day-old-beard :D
Oh and MORE SOCKS <3
Big thanks to
acebear for helping with the dialogue/translating and 
Rick Whitechest for proofreading!
And I love reading your comments :3
I added some minor details to their faces, let me know if you like it!
- Added a bit of an edge to their noses, which should look them more feline!
- Heart-shaped, domestic cat noses (only in the last panel as a test)
- Jake got some stubbly hair on his muzzle, which should look like a 3-day-old-beard :D
Oh and MORE SOCKS <3
Big thanks to
acebear for helping with the dialogue/translating and 
Rick Whitechest for proofreading!And I love reading your comments :3
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Feline (Other)
Size 940 x 1200px
File Size 932.6 kB
Listed in Folders
Did you mean action like...
a) fighting scenes?
Then yes. In Chapter 3 I will try my hand at classic comic brawls. I avoided doing fighting scenes so far since I felt like my anatomy & poses were not good enough for it. But I am looking forward to letting the Kats kick some gangsta ass soon!
b) porn?
Well yes, but actually no. But seriously tho: probably yes.
While we are getting there, I haven't quite figured out if I should put the porn in the main comic (which would drag down the pace and use up a lot of pages)
OR
make the porn its own thing, so I can do some a few hot pin-ups whenever I feel horny or need a break. Without sacrificing the plot.
a) fighting scenes?
Then yes. In Chapter 3 I will try my hand at classic comic brawls. I avoided doing fighting scenes so far since I felt like my anatomy & poses were not good enough for it. But I am looking forward to letting the Kats kick some gangsta ass soon!
b) porn?
Well yes, but actually no. But seriously tho: probably yes.
While we are getting there, I haven't quite figured out if I should put the porn in the main comic (which would drag down the pace and use up a lot of pages)
OR
make the porn its own thing, so I can do some a few hot pin-ups whenever I feel horny or need a break. Without sacrificing the plot.
Hey, it's okay to disagree on this. People can have different perception and opinions on stuff and you don't know what drives someone to the conclusion that they got to :)
But thank you for laying out, why and what exactly you liked. That is how I get to know what worked well and what did not - and improve in the future :3
But thank you for laying out, why and what exactly you liked. That is how I get to know what worked well and what did not - and improve in the future :3
Really? Huch, I tried extra hard with this page to keep the eye movement going easy and lost a bunch of time rearranging everything multiple times. But with so much text it was hard as hell D:
Alright, while I probably won't go back to the arrows, I rather try to do a more intuitive layout next page! :3
Glad you liked it still ^^
Alright, while I probably won't go back to the arrows, I rather try to do a more intuitive layout next page! :3
Glad you liked it still ^^
Maybe it's not the best time for a person to say "I love you" to someone, while that person is literally crying in front of them, about a failed romance about and third person?
(Besides the fact, that Jake doesn't know how Chance will react to him being gay at all. This is supposed to be the 90ties era, being gay isn't "typical" there)
All that said... Jake will come clean - rather soon. Once the conversation gets there :)
(Besides the fact, that Jake doesn't know how Chance will react to him being gay at all. This is supposed to be the 90ties era, being gay isn't "typical" there)
All that said... Jake will come clean - rather soon. Once the conversation gets there :)
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