I might redo this one some time in the future, when Dormant gets a definitive design.
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Well, you use "Este" when you're talking about masculine nouns, since "obra" is a female noun you should instead use "Esta".
In "me haga" you probably wanted to say "makes me". "me haga" is subjunctive which doesn't fit because your feeling here is 100% real. The right choice would be "me hace", simple present.
"que siento" should be replaced by "sentir" since is complementing the previous verb.
"halgo" is ok but it doesn't have an "h".
"Haces emociones muy bien" is fine. This is understandable but it will make other Spanish-speakers realize you're a foreigner. Not a bad thing in Mexico, we love foreigners.
"sentimientos asociado", should be "sentimientos asociados". We're talking here about "sentimientos" which is plural for feelings.
"con la experiencia con la muerte". This one is understandable too but it can be improved in many different ways. "con experiencias de muerte" and"con la experiencia de muerte" are some options.
You seem to be learning Spanish. If so, you're doing great!
I actually enjoy doing this sort of things, so don't hesitate to ask me something about Spanish.
In "me haga" you probably wanted to say "makes me". "me haga" is subjunctive which doesn't fit because your feeling here is 100% real. The right choice would be "me hace", simple present.
"que siento" should be replaced by "sentir" since is complementing the previous verb.
"halgo" is ok but it doesn't have an "h".
"Haces emociones muy bien" is fine. This is understandable but it will make other Spanish-speakers realize you're a foreigner. Not a bad thing in Mexico, we love foreigners.
"sentimientos asociado", should be "sentimientos asociados". We're talking here about "sentimientos" which is plural for feelings.
"con la experiencia con la muerte". This one is understandable too but it can be improved in many different ways. "con experiencias de muerte" and"con la experiencia de muerte" are some options.
You seem to be learning Spanish. If so, you're doing great!
I actually enjoy doing this sort of things, so don't hesitate to ask me something about Spanish.
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