The Autumn of the Emerald: Prologue
by Kender3421
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16 years ago
Well, here is a little teaser of my new series for you guys. I am well on my way to having chapter 1 done, but it's hand written so i don't know when it will be put up. However, I enjoy writing this series so it might be up sooner rather then later. Might be looking for characters later but right now I am not so keep reading if you want a cameo or a main character spot.
Once again, please leave comments, I love hearing what people say, even if it is just a pat on the back. Makes me write faster and better when i get those.
Enjoy.
ps. I left the colors of both the grandson and grandfather out for a reason. I wanted you guys to imagine it.
Once again, please leave comments, I love hearing what people say, even if it is just a pat on the back. Makes me write faster and better when i get those.
Enjoy.
ps. I left the colors of both the grandson and grandfather out for a reason. I wanted you guys to imagine it.
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Seems interesting in olden story form. Good characterization and characters in development. Careful with your portrayal of Arthur and Merlin old school works best. Still, to the fact a not so pleasant emerald island came to mind because of old wounds , but that has little to do with anything. Keep up the good work and best of luck with the rest.
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I was just referencing Arthur and Merlin, they will not be in the story at all. Thanks for the kind words though.
A;right good you earned some respect for the world you are developing.
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