Gift of Dreaming - Chapter 1
by Kender3421
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17 years ago
Well, it's been awhile since I've put up a story on here. This one belongs to a new series that I am titling "Gift of Dreaming." It's about Teige and Jayna in college.
I must put this here, this has, in no way, any impact on TDB. This is to be considered a separate series entirely, since Teige's personality is different entirely.
Synopsis - Teige has finished his last Futball game for his high school. However, his future is in doubt before his dreams become a reality.
Once again, any critiques or comments are appreciated and will be answered in the order of received. PLEASE! I am begging that you let me know what you think of my work. It gets really hard to write when I hear nothing about my work.
I must put this here, this has, in no way, any impact on TDB. This is to be considered a separate series entirely, since Teige's personality is different entirely.
Synopsis - Teige has finished his last Futball game for his high school. However, his future is in doubt before his dreams become a reality.
Once again, any critiques or comments are appreciated and will be answered in the order of received. PLEASE! I am begging that you let me know what you think of my work. It gets really hard to write when I hear nothing about my work.
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only one small point to note : once you have completed your writing read through and make sure all the words say exactly what you wish them to say
eg:- morning which i believe should be mourning
as i say its the only point i found and i cant wait for the next part